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For Juliella: Supernovas in Collision

Jan 20, 2015 20:44

For: juliella
Author: gyusama
Title: Supernovas in Collision
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jongdae/Luhan
Word count: 8065w
Summary: And in that moment, you outshone my whole galaxy. (Or, they’re teenage superheroes and kids in an orphanage)
A/N: this got out of hand.

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pairing: chen/luhan, !r2014, rating: pg-13

Comments 13

mydaedream January 20 2015, 20:59:55 UTC

"Stupid soccer guy" best way to describe Luhan tbh!!!

And why am I the first comment this fic was amazing!
From mama!powers over little orphan kids sekaitaoxing to LUCHEN /screams

The idea was quite unique and well thought through plus it had me clutch my heart so many times throughout the story.
And I might have giggled at XiuYeol more than ones. Awkward teenage boys istg.

Little girl Sehun was my favorite however and the scenes inside the orphans with the kids were just endearing - my heart was melting and I felt all mushy inside.

Thank you for this beautiful story, I enjoyed it very much ♡

gyusama February 7 2015, 04:55:35 UTC

OMG YES I love MAMA powers so much! I'm so happy you liked it ahh

Little baby Sehun was the highlight of the whole experience omfg? Loved writing her interacting with all the boys and whatnot ;u; Thank you for leaving such a wonderful comment ♥

haneira January 21 2015, 10:35:28 UTC

ok I read this out of pure boredom and now I can't stop smiling, thank god I read it, it was so good! Sehun is the little girl right? I didn't realise that until she showed her powers. Also I want to see everyone's expression when they found out that Joonmyun is a waterbender lol.

I enjoyed this story a lot, it is definitely one of my favourites now! And I think it could be easily have a sequel about other characters!

gyusama February 7 2015, 04:57:33 UTC

I WAS ACTUALLY THINKING OF MAKING JOONMYUN SHOW SOME POWERS but I didn't feel like it would fit ;;
so we can just imagine him filling up all those inflatable pools with water and all the kids slipping and sliding and him fussing over everyone

Thank you so much, you're a doll ♥

sorakim_90 January 25 2015, 06:20:37 UTC

I don't know how to describe my feelings when I read this story. I have so many emotion while reading this. I like how Jongdae deal the kids, how they love him so much, Luhan crush with JD, the fact that they secretly have a crush on each other, and Xiuyeol, they're so cutee. And I love the ending where they have a family bonding time. Thank you so much for this fic and the fact it's a Luchen fic makes me apreciate it more because I miss them ^^

gyusama February 7 2015, 04:59:39 UTC

SECRET FLIRTATIONSHIP CRUSHY THINGS SUSTAIN ME also Jongdae and his new exo family just warms my heart ;u; Ahh I miss them too ㅠㅠ But thank you for commenting! ♥

mydeerest_luhan January 30 2015, 06:16:36 UTC

This is so cool!! I love this so much! This is so sweet and the fact that this is Luchen is A++++! By the end, I just kept on grinning because this is too perfect. :)

Luhan sinks into his chair in resignation, “Yeah, post-coitus.”

“I hate you,” Minseok says, hanging up.

Luhan smirks. Small victories. -I kept laughing at this! This is gold hahahahaha

This is very well written. Thank you so much for this wonderful story author-nim! :D

gyusama February 7 2015, 05:00:48 UTC

AHH Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it ;u; laughs at the image of Minseok trying to tease Luhan but having it blow back up in his face *u*

canadaphile February 5 2015, 20:23:21 UTC

This was so great. The superpowers that were kind of not even mentioned. They just happened. No big. Supernatural community would know, but Lu Han lives under a rock WITH A SECRET HERO PANEL IN HIS BEDROOM. Jealous. And I'm jealous of Jongdae's hologram mask. That would be so handy.

The orphan kids were precious. Happy within their little family that just kept growing, in a nice way. Definite improvement with Joonmyun. Frilly apron and all. |D

=^..^=~

gyusama February 7 2015, 05:02:15 UTC

HONESTLY Luhan just needs to get out of the house. Not including the times he's saving the city, you know. Ugu I just wanted the kids to be happy and new daddies Xiuyeol and Luchen *u* happy family

canadaphile February 7 2015, 15:23:00 UTC

Those kids end up being downright spoiled once that butt is arrested. They get Jongdae and Joonmyun and pretty much a whole unit of parental/big brother figures.Their family booms. Once the kids all really realise their powers, there will probably be literal booms.