for xiu_jie: To Learn

Jan 23, 2015 11:45

For: xiu_jie
Title: To Learn
Rating: pg-13
Pairing: Chen/Tao
Word Count: 7,057
Warnings: grammar mistakes, unbetaed
Summary: Tao never knew he could care for someone he hated.
A/N: This is my first time joining an exchange (and as a pinch hitter). I hope you enjoy this, I made this on my final exam week and proud that I can finish it as I'm so excited ( Read more... )

!r2014, rating: pg-13, pairing: chen/tao

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bluedreaming January 25 2015, 00:37:18 UTC
This was delightful ☆彡 Jongdae so cutely manipulative and Zitao learning how to be a body guard! and the twins !!!!!! This was precious.

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babygunsho February 4 2015, 23:01:05 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting ^^ Glad you like it haha

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sorakim_90 January 25 2015, 04:51:49 UTC
Oh my God!! I thought Jongdae is the dominant one until he beg Tao to be his bodyguard. Jongdae is sassy but turns shy when it involved Tao, this makes me squealing so hard. This entire fic makes me squealing so hard, I love it :))))

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babygunsho February 4 2015, 23:00:03 UTC
I love to make a shy character and realize even if in the start I make sassy Jongdae, in the end still...hha. thank you for liking this ^^ <3<3<3

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parkbyun January 25 2015, 06:42:52 UTC
this was so cute and very enjoyable to read!
Jongdae is such a brat and he's genius :") but he's cute so it's justified lol
the last scene surprised me >.<
thank you so much for writing this <3

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babygunsho February 4 2015, 22:58:08 UTC
thank you so much for your comment ^^
why the last scene surprise you? hha. thank you for reading too ^^

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xiu_jie February 1 2015, 22:42:05 UTC
Ahhh I finally have time to read and comment >__< First of all! Yay Taochen! I was wondering which prompt would be picked, but then the summary gave it away already, haha.

"I don't know him." I snorted this was my favorite scene

"I will give you everything, just be my Bodyguard." he whispered. *eyebrow wiggling*

Awh Jongdae crying what a manipulative little...

Ah of course Jongdae would subject him to exercise-torture then feed him afterwards haha

"I'm worried more that I can't go to school and see you!!" Jongdae shouted. uuu feelings~

Nawh Jongdae's dad making Tao feel bad about his ""hatred"" kek

How cruel Kim-dad T_T asking for a scary test and then making fun of your poor son in front of his crush, haha

Jongdaaae so qt ;__ ; just confess~~

Overall this was a really cute story!! I would just recommend next time getting someone to read over for proofreading but >.< Thank you for writing!! Pinch hitter coming to my rescue, swoons~

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babygunsho February 4 2015, 22:51:28 UTC
thank you for your comment, have been waiting~! ahaha. Yes, I do realize need beta and proofreader but I still not have many friend in who likes exo as I'm still shy to greet first so...hha. I'm glad you like it, thank you so much ^^ <3<3<3

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