[Fic] Maybe it's not so bad after all...

[rarsii23]

Title: Maybe it’s not so bad after all
Pairing : HikaNoo
Genre : smut, fluff
Rating : NC-17
A/N : somebody made me write this... yes! YOU!! (you know who you are) lol. XDD
sorry for the fail smut, it's only my second time writing smut fic. :P

Comments

[ai_star]

Today is the only day we can go out and have fun, since you’ve been busy for the past few weeks” Inoo replied and pouted his lips.

*squeal*...kyaaaaaa.....I wanna see ..I wanna see...OMG..I bet he looks so cute..

“I don’t want to wait that long!! It’s raining and cold outside, and it took us forever to get here because the train was packed and now I have to wait 45 minutes!! I don’t want!!” Inoo said angrily and pouted his lips again.

*rolling on the floor laughing*.....He totally sounds like a girl!!....Seriously I can imagine him like this while Hikaru looks like he wanna crash his head onto the wall..

“Ah! Chinen got straight A’s on his report card, so we came here to celebrate” Yabu said and smiled proudly while patting Chinen’s head, looking like a father who was proud because his son got into an honor roll.is that necessary to include his 5's in this fic?.Muahahhaa.../gets stabbed by Rarsii...XDDD

[rarsii23]

*rolling on the floor laughing*.....He totally sounds like a girl!!....Seriously I can imagine him like this while Hikaru looks like he wanna crash his head onto the wall..

lmao. INOO IS A GIRL!! XDD and that's actually what I'm picturing when I wrote this part. LOL

and of course I will insert Chinen in my fics, if you pay attention, I always have Chii in all my fics~ even my yamashi or takabu fics. XDD

LMAO! I don't think it's their first time, but either way is ok I think, LOL.

... :P it will be too long if I write the bathroom part. lmao. xD

well, it's not really the first, since in Jasmine's bday fic. there's hikanoo part in it too~ LOL. XD

[suteii]

i loved it, it was amazing and i think it was done very well.

“I don’t want to wait that long!! It’s raining and cold outside, and it took us forever to get here because the train was packed and now I have to wait 45 minutes!! I don’t want!!” Inoo said angrily and pouted his lips again. Hikaru didn’t know what to do anymore, it seems like that day was as bad as the weather outside. He seems like a whiny baby, but i can't blame him, a forty five minute wait is just too long

The rest of JUMP members were there sitting in a big table with bowls of ramen in front of them. It was such a noisy table, looked like Daiki and Keito were having an eating competition again. On the corner of the table, Yuto and Yamada were discussing something with Takaki, probably the usual “how-to-talk-to-girls” talk. Ryutaro was busy eating his ramen with his PSP on his other hand. And Chinen was sitting on Yabu’s lap. I can so picture this happening, Poor Inoo-chan though, I wouldn't want to deal with the others either

[rarsii23]

waaaaaaahh really?! I'm glad... lol. cuz I don't really know how to write smut. that's why it's kinda... fail-ish? :P but I'm glad that you like it ^^

lol. I can totally imagine Inoo being a whiny baby though~

and yeaaay confetties! *dancing under the confetties* XD

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting~ ^^♥

[aoisoranohikari]

And now they ended up being together again with those eight noisy boys, like spending hours every day with them was not enough. ROFL!!!! I'm ROFLMAO-ing too much when I read that part!!! OMFG!!! LOL

Looking at Chinen’s smiley squirell face makes him wants to feed Chinen to a bear. believe me Inoochan that I'll kill you if you dare to do that!!! LOL

UWAAAAA!!!!! OH GOSSSSHHHHH~!!!!!! I LOVE THE SMUT PART THIS FIC~!!!!!
KDFSHJKLASGHKA~!!!! *nosebleed *faints *dies

[rarsii23]

HAAHHAAH!! I will kill Inoo too~ since I'm like chinen biased~ LOL. but I just think it's funny, so I put it in there. xD

YEAAY! I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT!! XD

Thanks for reading and commenting~ ♥

[katrinasacay]

a hot sex during a cold weather...that's just so nice.LOL
at least inoo is not so disappointed at all. xD

thanks for this hikanoo smut. :)

[katrinasacay]

wrong icon..geez...xD

[au_gravityfree]

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[rarsii23]

HAAHAH!! exactly what I'm thinking Kat! LOL.
cold on the outside, but hot in the inside. hahahaha XD /corrupted brain.

yeaaay~ I'm glad that you like it. ^^
Thanks for reading! ♥

and lol. you and tegomass = OTP XD

[puccynon2]

OMG! this day i read 2 SMUT HikaInoo*dies2

the rain atmosphere became more romantic because of them..*LOL

im soo happy because your fic..ehhehe x3

[rarsii23]

LOL. Hikanoo smut is awesome, though my favorite is still Takabu smut XD

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ^^
I'm glad you like it ♥