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[rashakiya]

The ground flowing beneath, they’re clouds. One turns into an angel, then the couple. I hug them and they are gone

Comments

nice prose.

[caizaosuz]

if you wrote that on your behalf, I send you kudos.

for the first time I actually read another person's creative writing as opposed to just skimming over it and going "eh".

kept me interested and rather enthralled for a bit.

but yeh it's really well written.

that's my two cents.

Re: nice prose.

[rashakiya]

Interestingly enough, this was my dream, I was merely writing it down so that I could remember it. The fact that it sounded poetical and such is merely a coincidence.

I could not, not with a million words, begin to describe what I truly saw.

[himi_renee]

I like It a lot. Where did you come up with the idea or was it just spontaneous?

[rashakiya]

As said above, it was a dream. How I wish I could return to it...

[moulinmeerkat]

ahhhhhh. good stuff.

o.0

[yavimaya]

I can never remember that much of my dreams...I've only had one close. Most of mine are very weird...

Re: o.0

[rashakiya]

You appear to have needed no introduction.
But, if you would, or if you see this, do tell...
(That is, if you can indeed remember.)