Comments | raspberry_pop: A Fortunate Fall (15/18)

raspberry_pop

A Fortunate Fall (15/18)

Jul 06, 2009 20:21

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pairing: merlinarthur, fanfiction, a fortunate fall, fandom: merlin

Comments 89

gallifreycalls July 7 2009, 04:39:53 UTC

So many aww moments in here. Glad to see Arthur verbally expressing his affection.

And HERMAN! I always think of pelicans or whales when I hear that name. :P

raspberry_pop July 7 2009, 04:42:13 UTC

Pelicans and whales? o.O. I just wanted a silly old name (no offense to people named Herman xD) Thanks so much for reading!

gallifreycalls July 7 2009, 05:09:31 UTC

Whale because of Herman Melville.
Pelicans...I'm not really sure why.

eosrose July 7 2009, 05:05:43 UTC

*squee*

I love it when Morgana talks since and Arthur is forced to admit he did wrong. How sweet that he kissed Merlin right in front of everyone! Maybe he's finally coming around...

raspberry_pop July 7 2009, 05:20:49 UTC

Yay I get a squee! That makes me giddy.

I usually have a lot of fun writing Morgana, but this one took forever. And yup, I guess he is. =) Thanks for reading!

noahvearn July 7 2009, 05:15:31 UTC

aww.... arthur finally and personally went straight to invite merlin home. that's so sweet. i do had a hunch though when alex received three tickets. i'm glad it went as i was imagined. it seems like alex is more mature than arthur. maybe it is a habit of arthur to disclose everything to himself but sooner or later, he must let it all out or else, he's the one who will be suffer and that's why merlin's there at the first place. isn't that right? ^^

raspberry_pop July 7 2009, 05:27:20 UTC

Well, Arthur's kind of been stalling for 15 chapters, I think it's good that he finally took initiative haha. Thanks for reading!

souzoukyuuketsu July 7 2009, 07:43:20 UTC

Guuhu. I love your fic. I really do. I know my comments are never very elaborated but you reduce me to the state of putty.

(And I should have gone grab something for the uni like an hour ago, but really couldn't help checking and since you had updated =DDD)

I mean you deserve to feel accomplished because... Woah. Blew me away, as usual.

raspberry_pop July 7 2009, 17:22:05 UTC

Awww! Putty! -turns you back-

I dunno, for me, this has gotten to be harder and harder to write...maybe because it's nearing the end or something and I'm feeling subconsciously anxious. So I don't know if the overall quality has gone down. But I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!! =)

oconel July 7 2009, 07:43:45 UTC

I'm glad Arthur is finally expressing how he feels about Merlin. :)

raspberry_pop July 7 2009, 17:23:09 UTC

Yuppp! Score one for Arthur hehe.