A Fortunate Fall (16/18)

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Comments

[souzoukyuuketsu]

Shit -_-

Booohooohooooo... Hope Arthur and Merlin (and Alex) will be happy together forever in the end (despite the dark clouds) because FUCK how they deserve this...

[raspberry_pop]

>.> Seems that I've tortured them a little too much, even I feel bad. But this chapter mostly wrote itself .__. To a happy ending! Thanks for reading!!

[gallifreycalls]

The mystery of Gwen is finally revealed! Once Arthur said she might be better off dead, I thought she was in a persistent vegetative state, locked in, or in a coma, but her amnesic (or early onset Alzheimer's) seems more hopeful. It is very nice to meet Gwen at last, and I'm looking forward to see how this visit plays out.

[raspberry_pop]

And I'll work hard =) thanks for reading.

[frakkin_addict]

Wow! Arthur has come along in leaps and bounds! I actually feel proud of him. ;) Great update!!!

[raspberry_pop]

Yup yup, I think Arthur totally deserves virtual cookies XD thanks for reading!

[raspberry_pop]

I don't really know how to answer that without spoiling so...>.> I"ll work hard though xDDD
Thanks so much for reading!

[noahvearn]

updates!!! i've read it straight away the first thing i woke up (and it was 6am ^^). but i had to get ready for work, so i commented once i arrived at the office ;)

it was very sweet of arthur to tell merlin and alex about gwen no matter how hard he felt. he was trying to change with a bit poorly attempts. well, at least, he has a desire to change. and poor gwen. i wonder what really caused her to have amnesia.

[raspberry_pop]

The fact that this merited a read from you at 6 am in the morning just awes me to no end. =P Thanks.

And I've still got two parts left so...=)