fic dump!

Nov 24, 2008 11:19

Sorry for the disgusting formatting, my eyes are kind of strained and I don't want to fight with LJ anymore orz.

Title: discussions in places that are pretty damn unlikely
Rating: PG
Pairing: Yesung (Jongwoon) / Kyuhyun
Prompt: 21, park benches
Notes: As usual, part of the Mirantae universe. Takes place during Blindfolds.

and we talk about things that we don't really know about. )

021, 038, leeteuk, 079, yesung, 061, kyuhyun, suju100

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famnos November 24 2008, 20:15:27 UTC
I kinda hate to say this but some how 'things that you want but probably won't get' ended up being the end to 'discussions in places that are pretty damn unlikely' which I guess was...not on purpose?

anyways~
This is just so awesome~ I loved Yesung 'self-reflection' kind of thing showing his identity problems and his unsatisfaction...
Kibum and Leeteuk~ cute^^ but somehow it's also sad and...has melancholic feel...and Kyu...innocent Kyu~^^ Well I guess not that innocent but...awww

I don't really know how to properly comment on this, excuse my ramble but me.likes.very.much.!.

Thank you for Sharing~! (and I want more out of that universe as cruel as it might be~ ^^)

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raspberrypages November 25 2008, 14:22:57 UTC
ahahaha fail lj post is fail. hopefully it's fixed now. ;;;

yesung's part was fun to write and i'm actually kind of proud of it too~ kibum and leeteuk's was written with a kind of "you're leaving, what am I supposed to do..? D:" theme in mind. and kyuhyun...kyuhyun's such a cutie, although he was totally OOC here. ;;;

I'm glad you liked it! <3 and there definitely will be more out of this universe. :D

thank you for commenting!

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famnos November 25 2008, 18:55:41 UTC
I know sometime LJ just...sucks...but then again...where would I get my hot asian guys boost?

you can be proud of it^^
Kibum and Leeteuk is an interesting pairing btw~ XD
and Kyu~...kyu~ XD

Yay~! I can't wait for it to come^^

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raspberrypages November 26 2008, 14:02:09 UTC
google images? :D *failidea*

Hey, I didn't write the prompts xD;; I'm just writing the stories.
and kyuhyunnie is such an idealistic boy. I can see him going far~

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raspberrypages November 25 2008, 14:23:28 UTC
LOL IKE D:

i told you it was a fic dump.
and I still have like, two more that need revising lol.

orz

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aznk_popaddict November 25 2008, 02:56:17 UTC
Aww, poor Yesung and his PTSD *I actually went on Wikipedia to find out what that meant XDD*

My favorite was the Eeteuk and Yesung one *YeTeuk is my OTP XD*

But not just because of the OTP!ness. It was also because of the dialogue and the conversation^^

Awesome work as always^^ Update soon *but don't kill yourself >.< I'd hate to have anything on my conscience...*

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raspberrypages November 25 2008, 14:28:09 UTC
hee, I did too...I was like, "...he needs a mental disorder. what about ptsd? what is ptsd exactly?" *fail*

i don't really have a yesung!otp tbh. D: i just put him with whoever happens..to...be...there, I guess. lol that was weird.

thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :D I have some more from this universe (...a lot more from this universe...) in store already so don't worry. C:

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raspberrypages November 25 2008, 14:34:05 UTC
i'm a huge sucker for military!verse stuff, although I probably got so many parts wrong. xD I'm trying to improve my dialogue because I'm used to weirdass description, so hopefully it's getting better~ thank you!

jongwoon...jongwoon will get a rest soon. <3 after his run-in with Siwon I think it's all good from there and he does have someone there for him so it's all good. n__n

thank you for commenting!

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g_myzo November 27 2008, 23:29:58 UTC
gosh, i just love love love this verse. kyuhyun still seems somewhat innocent and it's nice yesung got that interaction with him.
but poor jongwoonie, his mind is still not at rest and he's already bringing himself out there again..

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raspberrypages November 29 2008, 03:05:19 UTC
thank you!

kyuhyun...I'm too scared to do anything to Kyuhyun. D: I don't know how he'd react to anything. ;;;

ah, Jongwoon...he'll get a rest soon, I'm sure.

Thank you for commenting!

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