047. Stutter, Sungmin/Sungmin

Dec 27, 2008 23:24

Title: Stutter
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Character death
Prompt: 047. Stutter, Sungmin/Sungmin

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sungmin, suju100, 047

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superbmushroom December 28 2008, 04:52:58 UTC
GAHHHHH!

omg, this is so sad. T^T
poor Sungmin, he had to watch everyone he loved die.

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raspberrypages December 28 2008, 14:27:04 UTC
D: I didn't want it to be too sad...It just kind of worked out to be. >_< But then again, death is always pretty sad. D:

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rokkugo_ogukkor December 28 2008, 05:46:00 UTC
I can't even find the right words to say. I usually complain a lot about oneshots because they're so short, but this one just seems so perfect.

I'm memming this 'cause it's so freaking brilliant. Black is a shade, so the first paragraph was just hilarious. And finally, a really good way to write Min, Kyu and Kangin's other personalities...

I dunno. I just think it's great ^^.

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raspberrypages December 28 2008, 14:28:14 UTC
:3! I'm so happy that you liked it~ Thank you so much ^^

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reich_of_eris December 28 2008, 09:23:55 UTC
gosh... i had goosebumps all over when i read this! and i'm starting to tear! hrmmmmmmmm.... i solemnly swear. i shall never ever think about SuJu death... because... it's just so sad... T___T one by one!! guh... happiness just flew out the window.. *sniff*

this was very good by the way. i love the way it was written, the descriptions, the mood... i swear, i could already see the gray skies complete with the rainclouds looming above my head...

They wept for Super Junior. T___T guuuuuuh... *falls to the floor crying* i'm weeping i'm weeping!!! T__T

ON THE OTHER HAND.

aaaah, this is the first time i've seen a fic with aging sungmin. ehehe.

Siwon, Hankyung and Heechul all departed within six months of each other ----- hahaha... oh i should have known... i laughed a bit at this part... it's just so... THEM.

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raspberrypages December 28 2008, 14:24:49 UTC
I couldn't help but keep sihanchul together, haha.

I'm really glad you liked it, when I started it I thought it was going to be really fail lol.

Thank you!

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svtstarlight December 28 2008, 13:23:13 UTC
*sniffles* So sad...and beautiful and heartbreaking. How it must have been for him to watch all his friends die over the years and to be the only one left in the end... :(

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raspberrypages December 28 2008, 14:29:05 UTC
Thank you! I really shouldn't have put him through all that. D: He doesn't deserve it.

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minamoto December 28 2008, 20:49:36 UTC
gmadkldskjglsd THE ICON, YOU USED IT. <3

gkdsjhklsjhfk;jgkldjj gkdsjgklsjg SO SAD. D: Your angst is getting better and better bb <3 Sungminnie-ah... D:

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raspberrypages December 28 2008, 22:27:11 UTC
LOL VIOLIN BOY

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raspberrypages December 28 2008, 22:27:46 UTC
And fuck I love this icon

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minamoto December 28 2008, 22:29:01 UTC
LOL I DIDN'T HAVE ANYTHING ELSE TO PUT ON IT. I SUCK AT TEXT. D:

and I love that icon too omg the colours~

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