Comments | ratbastrd: bad and ongoing poetry alert

ratbastrd

bad and ongoing poetry alert

Apr 03, 2009 23:32

trying to write a poem, which i haven't done successfully in years ( Read more... )

Comments 5

lonesomefrog April 4 2009, 16:07:46 UTC

I like it! A promising start! MOAR PLS.

Shut up with the uncreative thing, will you? Just stick to "ass" when you say that kind of shit, it's more accurate. :P

angelsdevils April 4 2009, 17:39:11 UTC

I actually really like it. The imagery is... witchy, for lack of a better word.

yaz327 April 4 2009, 19:17:06 UTC

Keep it going! Absolutely worth pursuing, already sigh-worthy. (The grammar teacher inside sez "You had me at 'present tense' and its double entendre.")

creidylad April 7 2009, 00:55:50 UTC

That last stanza has been with me since I first read it.

Kudos.

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