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Comment-fic Meme! Right here, right now!

Oct 08, 2011 13:30

SPOILER WARNING FOR LAST AIRED EPISODE (7.03) IN THIS POST

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7.03 comment-fic meme, comment-fic is eating my brain

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fantsywever October 13 2011, 03:02:57 UTC

Bobby groaned. Idiot boys of his couldn’t figure out what was good for them. Well, Dean couldn’t. Sam, for once, was doing as well as could be expected. He’d woken briefly, a couple of hours into the drive, asked where they were, and gone back to sleep. The next time he’d woken, Bobby saw him press on his hand injury immediately. A quick inquiry as to how he was doing, and Sam had answered that the devil was creeping him out by being too quiet. He’d barely gotten that sentence out before drifting off again ( ... )

a sleep aid. fantsywever October 13 2011, 03:05:33 UTC

Sam was by this time awake and he seemed to be staying there for now. Bobby decided to cede to Dean’s wishes and get the younger brother inside first. He wasn’t sure it was a good idea to un-strap Sam, but the young man was heavy and there was no way that Bobby could actually fit the stretcher through the stairs and in the door ( ... )

Re: a sleep aid. part three fantsywever October 13 2011, 03:06:51 UTC

Though Bobby knew that he shouldn’t leave the boys, he had a mess to clean up at home. Once he was sure that Sam was not going to check out on him completely, he started driving back to South Dakota. Once there he quickly torched what remained of the building (Hey, there would be time to do a through job later, Right now the boys needed him), and grabbed the impala. Dean would hate it if his baby was left alone for too long, and the ambulance was hardly an inconspicuous ride ( ... )

Re: a sleep aid. part three fantsywever October 14 2011, 22:46:31 UTC

OP here: What a wonderful little story! You picked up on so many of the details I didn't mention but did think about - and even some of the ones I didn't. (But now make perfect sense.) The stretcher, the crutches, the Impala being at the cabin, Rufus' booby traps - love the bit about the fireman's carry. I also love how Bobby kept his mind off his own problems by caring for the boys.

I do think it would be the most natural thing in the world for Dean to store Cas' coat in the Impala. And I think they all miss him terribly, even if they have been too busy to show it. (That's show for you. That's why there are these fix-it memes.)

Thank you so much for this story. I adore it so much. It certainly brings a smile to my face.

Re: a sleep aid. part three fantsywever October 15 2011, 04:28:08 UTC

thanks for the comment. it was my first supernatural fic. it was fun to write.

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