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tragedy and comedy and a little somethin' else anonymous November 29 2012, 06:46:55 UTC
How could that other site not give you comments. Shame upon them.

The Scottish Play is so rich in ways to run amok. Loved the setting. You fleshed out your characters so well and so cleanly.

Pool tube raft! Hey kids, don't drink and float!

Oh to have such a line coach. Had to smush the grin off my face after that scene......

(Perhaps you could time stamp these guys sometime)

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marlowe78 December 2 2012, 16:08:49 UTC
I really liked this. Nice and fun, with a lot of Shakespear :-D

Also, I absolutely have to know what Jeffrey was doing with the Corgies!

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scarletscarlet December 3 2012, 07:43:33 UTC
Ah, this was just lovely. And hee, not something I'd normally expect to say about a story in which JDM dies, but in fact that was kind of hilarious :). I kept imagining him as being very Brian Blessed, too, which was fun.

Poor awkward Jensen!

A charming story, this; I smiled my way through it :).

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unplugged32 December 3 2012, 21:44:27 UTC
Fumbling Jensen is adorable, great story:)

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strive2bhappy December 8 2012, 18:31:04 UTC
that was one of the best ways to learn lines ever!!!

seriously, this was cute and really hot.

and this:

Jeffrey, it turned out, had met a ignominious end in an incident involving the hotel pool, seven pool noodles woven into a makeshift raft, a blood alcohol content well over the legal limit, and a truly astounding number of Welsh corgis.

made me laugh likely more than it should have. BRILLIANT use of words. such imagery.

loved this!!!

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