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rattrash

.:013:. [Text]

Jan 19, 2011 12:08

I've been thinking on it a little, and here's what I've come up with so far in the way of a doctrine that I myself would follow in hopes that others would take it on too.

Princess Zelda, Prince Schneizel, please let me know what you think? I don't have much at all, just a really small beginning.

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I, as a resident of Demeleier, will not ( Read more... )

just another phrase, trying to help, so um yeah well hi, i don't know if this is um

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unholy_rebirth January 19 2011, 17:23:02 UTC

[Mama cow appears on your communicator, looking unsure.]

rattrash January 19 2011, 17:26:04 UTC

Thereth? What's up?

unholy_rebirth January 26 2011, 03:03:40 UTC

If my allies are harmed here, I cannot stand by.

rattrash January 26 2011, 13:08:40 UTC

So I should add something to the first part like 'unless the first blow be cast against me' or 'except in defence of another' perhaps?

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[audio] anearlmustmarry January 20 2011, 17:47:54 UTC

[This might - might - be a snigger.]

Now that's sure to keep residents united.

[Audio] rattrash January 20 2011, 19:31:59 UTC

[First blow] It's a work in progress Sir. Any input is welcome.

anearlmustmarry January 21 2011, 00:05:17 UTC

Honestly? You should have locked this to the people you're working with if it's still in development. People feel less enthused by leaders when they see the bones and organs of a statement. They prefer the end result.

rattrash January 21 2011, 10:47:43 UTC

Well it's a little late now I think... Besides, I'm a mathematician at heart, I like to show my working and prove how I got to my final result. Even if people prefer not to see it, I want to be honest with them.

carcinoGeneticist [CG] began trolling Trash [TEXT] sdrawkcabsllort January 20 2011, 17:52:34 UTC

YOU KNOW, IT WOULD BE SO MUCH FUCKING BETTER IF YOU DIDN'T RAPE ALL OF THOSE COMMAS.
AND LEAVE THEM BROKEN AND BLEEDING ON THEIR OWN.
POSSIBLY UNDER A LITTLE SHOWERHEAD.
WEEPING AND CRYING TO THEMSELVES AS THEY LISTEN FOR THE CREAKING DOOR THAT SIGNIFIES YOUR RETURN.
I MEAN, JEGUS, I'M A FUCKING TROLL AND THIS LOOKS LIKE SHIT TO ME.
AND YOU'VE NEVER SEEN SOME OF THE SHIT I HAVE TO SLOG THROUGH VIA TEXT.

[TEXT] rattrash January 20 2011, 19:33:14 UTC

So your problem is with the text, not with the sentiment?

sdrawkcabsllort January 21 2011, 00:03:18 UTC

MY PROBLEM IS YOU TREATING US ALL LIKE WE'RE WRIGGLERS SHITTING OUR GRUBNAPKINS WHEN YOU CAN'T EVEN PUNCTUATE A SENTENCE.
JEGUS FUCK, THEY'RE COMMAS, NOT LITTLE TEARS. YOU DON'T HAVE TO MAKE THE OFFICIAL DOCUMENT LOOK AS SAD AS YOU CLEARLY ARE.

rattrash January 21 2011, 10:49:17 UTC

[Second blow] I'm sorry. Maybe you could tell me how to phrase it better? Since you're better at prose?

[Audio] shamanisticrage January 22 2011, 02:38:28 UTC

Your words seem to imply any of us have an intention to stay.

[Audio] rattrash January 24 2011, 12:32:43 UTC

Well... It's not that we want to stay but, so far there's still no way home been found. We have to make the best of our time here don't we?

[Audio] shamanisticrage January 25 2011, 06:13:11 UTC

That sort of mindset is a slippery slope, boy.

[Audio] rattrash January 26 2011, 13:09:19 UTC

Why is that? I don't really understand.