Fic: A Little Evil Comes A Long Way (Kahlan/Cara) 32/33

[raug_moss]

Title: A Little Evil Comes A Long Way
Author: raug_moss
Pairings: Kahlan/Cara
Rating: NC-17
A/N: modern AU

Comments

[bsofthewest]

SO GOOD SO GOOD SO GOOD SO GOOD
Hurry with the next. It's too good of a story to tease your loyal readers.
I really love this fic!

[raug_moss]

I think this entire story has been sort of a tease, but still I swear that I was not planning on doing that :P
thank you! I'm happy you're still reading, I'll post the next chapter soon!

[chickinwhite]

aw, I love the tension and the cliffy right at this point... You have me right on the edge! It´s brillant how you ended up here, you´ve build up a scenario that is intriguing, familiar and new all the same! There i sthat bond between Kahlan and Cara, still somewhat fragile and new, the gentle Rahl, a criminal with a heart, and now Denna, who shows a new face in all the trouble... I´m very very curious how you will end it!!!

But where-ever you´ll lead it: I really enjoyed your story so far! I liked your writing very much, and your story was always fun to read :)
I do not like seeing it ending, but: thank you for all the time you spent on it!
Now go and bring it to a famous ending! I can´t wait.... :)

[raug_moss]

thank you so much!
I'm glad you really enjoyed the story.
Ich muss ehrlich sagen, dass es nicht mein bestes fic ist, aber das längste :P ich weiß das es sehr fast-paced geschrieben ist, und ich auch nicht unbedingt sehr auf Wortwahl und bla geachtet hab, aber ich wollte damit mal Plotentwicklung und Länge trainieren. das hat funktioniert :P

[chickinwhite]

schnell, vielleicht! aber du hast echt einen guten Sinn für deine Charaktere! Wenn du sagst du hast es ein wenig "nebenbei" geschrieben... Mann! Dann wüsst ich wirklich gerne, wozu du fähig bist wenn du dich auf ne Story richtig einläßt!!! ...
Ich merk schon dass die Story fast-paced gestrickt ist... Aber-sie macht Spass und - du hast wirklich Talent zum Erzählen!! Bleib dran! Du hast das Zeug um eine Story zu einer Tale zu machen... Ich würd mich freuen mehr von dir zu lesen!!
*winks*

[raug_moss]

ahh danke, das geht natürlich runter wie Öl :P
Balsam for mein kleines Autorenherz ^-^

ich hatte ehrlich gesagt am Anfang noch andere Plotstränge geplant, mit Kahlan's Vergangenheit, und die Sache mit Tess, dem Designer, wollte ich auch länger hinauszögern, aber irgendwann hab ich dann die Geduld verloren und einfach weitergeschrieben x)
und ich werd natürlich auf jeden Fall weiterschreiben. vllt kann ich mir bei dir bisschen was abgucken :P deine Story hatte ja auch epic proportions

[burning_arrow]

New chapter and oh, so awesome! You do love your cliff-hangers, don't you? It's OK, we do too. :) Also, was that really a Kill Bill reference you snuck in there?! That kind o' makes it double awesome.

[raug_moss]

*chuckles quietly*
you're very good, you get bonus points for picking up on the Kill Bill reference!
I'll tell you a secret, this scene where Denna shoots Kahlan, was actually the first one in my mind and all I had to do was somehow construct a story around it :P
thank you!

[burning_arrow]

I love it! It's a great scene to start building around, and look at all the amazing stuff that we got because of it. :-) I know you aren't sure how much time you'll have once you leave the country, but hopefully you can make a guest appearance now and then, at least!

[wkgreen]

OOoo.. Denna is an evil bitch!!!
And things were going so well to!
Taking bets that Cara is rescuing her!!

Waiting for more! Hanging on the edge of the cliff!!! :)

[raug_moss]

Denna really is evil, but we sort of knew that, didn't we?
and yes yes Cara certainly has something to do with Kahlan's rescue... if there's a rescue... who knows?
also I know that this cliffhanger was sort of evil, but since Denna appeared in it, I thought 'why not' :P
thank you!

[laurilee59]

HOLY HOT HELL BATMAN!! Damn nothing like leaving us hanging. This was an amazing sequence of events. I never expected Denna's appearance. Great update.

[raug_moss]

thank you!
I'm glad you liked this chapter and the little surprise it held. I did promise that Denna would be back in some earlier chapter, and that promise I wanted to keep :D