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ravaged_clarity

Le Guerre de Deux Coeurs

Mar 10, 2008 17:22

Title: La guerre de deux coeurs
Author: ravaged_clarity aka. tia_maria_616
Pairing: Ville/ Bam & others

POV: Both
Rating: PG/ NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own anything mentioned, I don't know anybody mentioned, and I cannot see that this ever happened. But please, don't steal.
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Comments 32

midge62680 March 10 2008, 17:58:45 UTC

Wow.

Just...wow.

I absolutely love period works such as historical fiction, and I can't wait to read more!!!

*huggles*

PS: Well-done on the title! Very fitting. I'll refrain from translating though--wouldn't want to spoil it! :-)

tia_maria_616 March 10 2008, 18:30:31 UTC

Thank you very much lovely. I hope you shall enjoy the rest just as much. It won't stay so PG for long!

(and thanks ;) )

snowisgreat March 10 2008, 18:35:27 UTC

Yes! Enjoyed it very much :D
I liked the way you introduced them both and I especially like how they are so different and yet so very similar in how they have adapted to whatever life they are "commanded" to live.

seduction was nothing if not a display of verbal acrobatics - that so perfectly fits how I could a imagine a 18th century Ville :)
And I think it's funny that you made him so vain, lol

Btw - how many alias are you gonna have?!

ravaged_clarity March 10 2008, 18:43:19 UTC

Whooop!

Oh yes, the pretty boy is a very vain boy!

And I can safely say at least a dozen more ;)
(Nah, there is a proper reason for it)

Thank you for your lovely comment yet again ♥

snowisgreat March 10 2008, 19:00:28 UTC

My pleasure, my dear - leaving a comment is the least I can do in return for getting to read your lovely stories :) ♥

sweetchild85 March 10 2008, 18:43:06 UTC

ooookay... you got me curious and I want to know how it will go on. I already awaited you posting this and you hinted some things that will come... so don't keep me waiting for too long =P

only thing I really hate about the story is the mass amounts of French/mentioning of France or anything else in that direction. you know how much I LOVE it.

♥ ♥ ♥

ravaged_clarity March 10 2008, 18:45:39 UTC

I'll try not to! ;P

Well now I know you hate it, but it's set in France! :P
Buuuut, once the general scene is all painted out, perhaps there shall not be too many french words.

Love from Mummy! ♥

kymburrlee March 10 2008, 21:11:48 UTC

Very nice. I have thing for period pieces and this place and era has always been intriguing to me. Then the Vam added...I love it.

Note to self: Learn French. 0_o

tia_maria_616 March 10 2008, 21:19:45 UTC

Thank you lovely, I'm enjoying doing the research for this one too, though it does take quite a while.

There's not too much French is there? Do I need to explain the terms a little more?

kymburrlee March 10 2008, 21:23:12 UTC

Oh I'm sure it does.

I'll be okay. I can pretty much figure it out by what's around it and if something really stumps me, I can always do a little research of my own. Thanks for the offer though. =)

non_timebo_mala March 10 2008, 21:24:33 UTC

I really, really like this and it's only the intro! I /love/ period pieces and I don't recall ever seeing one from this time.
Haha the vain Ville made me snort and shake my head. xD
Luckily I'm in French so I should be able to decipher what is written should you decide to use some. Wootness. lol
Wonderful already and I can't wait for more!

tia_maria_616 March 11 2008, 07:57:57 UTC

Thank you :D I find this period really interesting too, so naturally wanted to write it :)
Yeah, but I just see him like that so easily! ;)
I don't plan on using too much French, but for some names and titles it's unavoidable. I aim to write it so everyone can understand though!
Thanks once again! <3