Aesthetics (Prompt 015, 100OriginalFics Challenge)

[ravanasnape]

Title: Aesthetics
Author: RavanaSnape
Prompt: 015 (Blue)
Rating: PG-13
Length: 602 words

Summary: Her body evolved, constantly changing and yet she remained oblivious, consumed by her thirst.

A/N: originalpuck asked me what she looked like. I hadn't given it much thought, but then I did, and this was the result.

Comments

[hallwaydancer]

I like the beginning; usually people simply describe someone's current appearance, so the way you wrote added some really interesting layers to it.

-GC

[ravanasnape]

Thank you :) I think this is one character who had so much potential in one direction, but instead chose something completely different.

And that makes me sound really pretentious, but I can't think of another way of expressing it :S