Romancing the Pain - Part 16

Sep 13, 2009 11:45


Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: M (for language and violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: There is NOTHING like a good night out at a country music gig and awards ceremony to boost the ol’ ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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mmm_kekse September 13 2009, 08:40:53 UTC
I'm happy you found you're muse. I'm happy she came home with you. I'm happy you had a better than orgasmic time at that gig. but reading you're hyper and happy again totally made my heart stop. *laughs* Raven don't write when you're happy! please! though I think I should be grateful that you El Gordo didn't cut her up. yet. "You can say anything you want because I’ve heard it all before. All you can do is pray for a quick death… which you ain’t gonna get." lol seriously though you can't stop there! *winces* you really love torture don't you? *sighs* ah well actually no you should stop there! don't cut her up or I fly over to Australia and kick your ass. and don't think I can't do this just because you're probably way tougher than I am doing martial arts stuff. I'll just sneak up on you and run away afterwards! yes I'm smooth and manly like that! LOL but well at least Pepa broke that other guys nose yay! good for her... or... not... I don't know. bad for him! :D ( ... )

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raven_bard September 13 2009, 09:24:07 UTC
*giggles* You poor thing. So incoherent and yet understandable in your comment. I can't believe you got up and read this first thing...probably not the best way to start your day huh? *hands you a candy bar* Some sweetness to coat over the angst. Lol.

"reading you're hyper and happy again totally made my heart stop. *laughs* Raven don't write when you're happy!" ~ ROFL! I can't help it. When I'm hyper and happy, my muse gets all juiced up and my brain's ready to take the reigns! And who said anything about cutting Pepa up? I was more thinking...carving like you would a turkey but hey *shrugs and grins*

And you're gonna fly all the way here just to kick my ass? Wow...that's some expensive ass kicking...lol. And yeah...I hope my muse stays too. As for the suspense...just a few more chapters, just a few more. *pats you gently on the back*

And you are more than welcome! I'm glad you're enjoying the album. I love Last of Me too. Another sad and melancholy song. *laughs*

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mmm_kekse September 13 2009, 12:04:53 UTC
yeah maybe I should have read your other fic first. I mean I haven't read it yet but it has the NC-17 rating and Juney and Xe in the A/N. so it probably would have been better to wake up to that LOL

your brain and your muse. *shakes head* they're such a twisted pair. what horrible things have you done to them that they work like that? ROTFL and I'm just ignoring the turkey comment. not saying anything. just eating my candy bar and pretend I didn't read that at all. :) ha :) totally unaffected by your suspenseing (that's not a word is it?) and not having terrifying images in my head :) and well happy Thanksgiving LOL

and yeah expensive but necessary lol and well I heard Australia is nice and quite beautiful so I'd hide somewhere pretty after the ass kicking and relax a little. enjoying some angst free time 'till the addiction kicks in again and I start begging you to torture them some more. though I kinda prefer the emotional self-inflicted pain *laughs*

and just gotta love sad songs <3 xD

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river919 September 13 2009, 09:09:31 UTC
Heart-wrenchingly good chapter! Hard to read but makes sense as you have them come full circle with getting their revenge on El Gordo eventually so that they can heal properly and get back to happy togetherness! :-) Glad that muse is back, I'd say you throw some shackles on her and keep her tied to your bedpost. ;-)

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raven_bard September 13 2009, 09:13:25 UTC
*nods* Revenge is such sweet sorrow. I have no idea who said that but it's an awesome line.

"Glad that muse is back, I'd say you throw some shackles on her and keep her tied to your bedpost" ~ Kinky, River. I don't she'd appreciate it though. When I release her for work she might just not gimme any inspiration! Lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

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booglebee September 13 2009, 12:51:13 UTC
Oh my golly golly gosh!
Very tense.
Cringe-worthy for poor Pepa!
Ahhh. It's like sad, but also soooooooo good! See it doesn't matter whether you are writing a happy scene, a love scene, a angsty scene, a...depressing scene. I still love them all.

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raven_bard September 13 2009, 12:53:40 UTC
*waves* Hey boogs. Welcome to the angst fun house! Thanks for reading and commenting...you're comments are definitely boosters to writing the next chapters. *grins*

Now if you would like a lil pick me up, head over to the sneak preview/peep show of Silvia's Secret Diary. *laughs*

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booglebee September 13 2009, 13:08:45 UTC
oh yes I am definately heading over there now to read quickly before I go to sleep! Ha! another bedtime story..and its nc-17, awesome!
My comments are boosters? Awwww good to hear that!

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sportysmurf September 13 2009, 14:19:57 UTC
Wah. No more hurting of Pepa, please? :( I know there will be at least one more, but no permanent injuries at least? And top it off with Silvia going ballistic on this El Gordo guy's ass. *nods* Yup, that would make a good ending along with come comforty-cuddling after Pepa's better.
*sits down to wait it out*

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raven_bard September 13 2009, 23:43:49 UTC
*enigmatic smile* Hey, Sport. You don't mind me shortening your username to Sport do ya? And I can't answer that first question...we'll just have to wait and see huh?

But I can guarantee a severely pissed off Silvia. Nobody messes with her girl and gets away with it.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

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sportysmurf September 13 2009, 23:47:56 UTC
Sport is fine, or Smurf - I answer to both ;)
Am awaiting the rescue of Pepa impatiently.
*starts to pace worriedly*

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raven_bard September 13 2009, 23:49:00 UTC
*nods* Pepa's not gonna be the subdued victim. It's just not her. It doesn't matter if she's all tied up...the woman can be creative in other ways...plus I had to give her some satisfaction; breaking that guy's nose via head-butting was the only way I could think of.

I'm sorry this is making you nervous...I'll wrap it up...soon. *chuckles* Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I really appreciate it. :-)

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