Romancing the Pain - Part 20

Sep 25, 2009 19:20


Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (for violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Sorry, this installment is late I know. It’s been a harsh week. I’m so glad the weekend is here. Hope ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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lovelyafterglow September 25 2009, 14:40:12 UTC
So close. Soooo close! That phone call better not drop before Silvia has a chance to trace it!

Oh, and Yay! for them finally being able to talk to one another...however short the "conversation" was. ;-)

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raven_bard September 26 2009, 00:53:52 UTC
Would I let the call drop? *smirks*

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...glad you enjoyed it. :-)

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girlechick September 25 2009, 14:54:54 UTC
Yeh!! She got to talk to Silvia!! But as soon as you think everything is ok, You leave me on a cliffy!! SO can't wait for next chapter! Great chapter Raven_bard!

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raven_bard September 26 2009, 00:56:57 UTC
Lol, sorry. Cliffies are necessary from now on. Too much action in one chapter and my head might just explode.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

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change_theend September 25 2009, 15:40:02 UTC
PEPA IS THE (WO)MAN! She totally kicked El Gordo's ass! Then it got better when she called Silvia...such a sweet few moments! Then...BOOM. She's rammed. AHH! But..I have my money on Pepa! No Doubt. This is such a great fic!! I've read every chapter...just haven't commented till now, is that horrible of me? Just know that you have another big fan! :)
Keep it up Raven, I'm loving this story!

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raven_bard September 26 2009, 00:56:03 UTC
Nah, it's not horrible. Commenting can be difficult but I'm glad you decided to finally drop a note. *grins*

And yes...Pepa's totally gonna go ape shit. I mean, she was abducted, tied up and tortured. People are bound to go a lil nuts after that kinda thing.

Thanks for reading!

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angie005 September 25 2009, 15:42:03 UTC
GRRR!!! Need to stop reading fanfics at WORK! I'm so going to get in trouble but I couldn't resist to see that you put up your next installment!

I was overwhelmed by so many emotions reading this!

First I was escatic because Pepa was going to give El Gordo what he deserved. Then I was pissed because Pepa just let El Gordo go but ended up being attacked while leaving.

Then I was screaming in joy (really I was, at work) because Pepa overpowered mafia man and found a cellphone to call her wife.

But that's not all, I was laughing my ass off when Silvia screamed "I'M BUSY!" Priceless!! No one interupts Silvia!! NO ONE!!

*back to emotions* Then I thought finally, Sivlia is going to be able to track Pepa done, I was shaking in my seat but what? WHAT? WHAT???

a cliffhanger?? geesh, Raven! That's all I have to say.

FYI.. So glad to see you back. I was wondering where you disappeared but RL must be a bitch. I know it is for me.

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raven_bard September 26 2009, 01:01:55 UTC
*chuckles* I remember getting caught reading fan fics at school...and it just haaaaad to be a smut fic. Good thing my teacher didn't want the details of what I was reading; she just wanted me to go back to my work.

Wow, I got all those reactions outta you? That's so cool! I'm honored. *grins* And hey, Pepa's weak and hungry and very tired...not exactly her fault...but she got him back! *bounces* You also yelled in joy? At work? *wince* That musta been awkward. Lol.

"No one interupts Silvia!! NO ONE!!" ~ *nods* I agree there....far be it for anyone to try to interrupt Silvia in work mode. She'd bite their heads off.

Sorry bout the cliffy...but I'm sure you'll live. *grins*

Thanks for reading and commenting...yeah I was so deep in the RL pool that I could barely climb back out. But the weekend's here! I can finally try to chill a lil. RL sucks sometimes.

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angie005 September 26 2009, 15:40:32 UTC
Well the yell of the joy was "YES!" but don't worry, everyone knows I laugh out loud and say things while I work. So I'm hoping they think I'm just vocal and not crazy.

*RL sucks too

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lenageek September 25 2009, 16:49:40 UTC
Frikking, frakking....aaauugghhhh!!! Yes, this chapter sucked but only because of the cliffhanger!!! Let's hope Super Silvia can trace the call in time!

The 'Silvia's gonna freak' line reminded me of the 'Gabrielle's gonna freak' line in Xena when Xena was going to tell her that she's pregnant - lol!

Hope you're having a relaxing weekend and that the RL bitchiness/busy stuff goes away soon! ;D Hang in there!

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raven_bard September 26 2009, 01:04:35 UTC
"The 'Silvia's gonna freak' line reminded me of the 'Gabrielle's gonna freak' line in Xena when Xena was going to tell her that she's pregnant - lol!" ~ Yeah, my mind strayed to that similarity after I wrote it. I was like "huh...Xena said that." Then I pictured Xena's face when she said it and I started to laugh. Oh that was a good episode...she sounded sooo guilty! Like she was about to tell a lover that she cheated. *giggles* No subtext my ass. Xena and Gabrielle were lovers!! *laughs*

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Yeah, RL sucks...it's cuz I only have about 4 more weeks of uni so all the assignments are piling up. Well I hope you have a good weekend too. :-)

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