Romancing the Pain - Part 22

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: M (swearing and violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: I’m so sorry this is late. Honestly, my muse has taken an extended vacation and I was so darn

Comments

[booglebee]

You know I do like cliffhangers..you know to keep me wanting....
but noooooooo not anymore!! I don't like them! Especially not this one!
Ahhh...!!
It was all tense and flicking in between Pepa and the rest...Ooooo just reminded me of 24 for a minute! I don't even watch that show...
But yes! Very good.
Got me all like "OOOOOOOO What's gonna happen now....*keeps reading* oh WTF A cliffhanger?? Geeeeeezzzzzz"
But its ok..I will just be desperately...awaiting the next chapter..

[raven_bard]

I don't watch 24 either...but it reminded you of it? Wow, cool! I know, y'all are about to bury the hatchet in my skull for all these cliffies but I can't think of another way to end them.

Next chapter soon...my muse was kind enough to gimme the first paragraph to the next chapter before she skulked off somewhere. Soo in a few days k?

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

[booglebee]

Yeah, i even heard that...clock ticking countdown thing that 24 has in my head..

BUT.....I could never really be upset with you for your cliffies..I just couldn't so you could just keep on cliffing us and I'd still like you just the same.
But I can't speak for everyone else, so you might need to run and hide.

Sabes que? You're muse is completey amazing, when she's around but she does have a habit of straying doesn't she?
But all good! I should really be concentrating on uni anyway...

Have a good day!
p.s. edited this comment 3 times...so yeah probably got like..3 emails for it

[qosmio18]

This was really really good. Every sentence had me on edge. What a cliff hangar. I'm literally yelling @ my phone. Wow. Seriously on edge for the next installment.

[raven_bard]

Aww I'm sorry your phone got yelled at. And I'm sorry for the cliffie. I promise to try to update sooner. Between RL and my runaway muse, it' been tough. *laughs*

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[qosmio18]

Lol My phone is tough. Plus I have apoligize repeatedly. Since it allows me to read awesome fic.

As for your muse, can't hate for taking breaks. Since she does such a great job.

I have a love/hate for cliffhangars. But the end results of cliffhangars, they make you crave for more. Lol

[river919]

I don't even care it's a cliffhanger because I know everything will work out well, Silvia is close by. YAY! Though I'm thinking Pepa should go back and just shoot El Gordo and not just leave him laying there unconscious - that sadistic spawn of hell is too dangerous to be let to regain consciousness. Thanks for the great update. :-)

[raven_bard]

Yup, yup, yup. At least now Silvia and Pepa are in the same location. They just need to find each other. I think as much as Pepa wanted to shoot El Evil, she won't. Police protocol won't let her shoot an unconscious hostile and her conscience won't allow it. She'll deal with him when he's awake. *grins*

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

[slayergirl13]

oh my goodness woman! ok so I know I've called you evil in the past and yep still applies here and wicked, yes seems you still are, but now ugh! you're just, that was just, you're just...mean *pouting*

Come on, I love the update don't get me wrong, but such a cliffhanger, good grief, I am trying to be extremely patient waiting for the hot pelirroja to start the ass whooping, but really I can only be a good girl for so long. Please, tell me she gets to start smacking people around soon!

I loved the chapter, really, I did I know all the whining might have made you think different, but you're awesomely talented. And you guessed it, I can't wait for the next update, so I don't know try to be nice to your muse so she'll be nice back ;)

~~ oh and on another note the music vid absolutely rocked!!! ~~

[raven_bard]

*snickers* Aww c'mon don't pout at me. *hands you a brownie* Please? The cliffhanger was needed; it's the only way to end the chapter. But I promise a long ass update...it's almost done baking. My muse is being nice to me today. So tomorrow I should be able to post the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and commenting. Oh and I'm glad you liked the music vid! *grins*

[bluechicki]

*holding my heart* God raven...you had me on the edge of my seat with every word...*claps* :DD
You know how much i adore your writing and this amazing story.
You are one incredibly talented chica....
Hope Silvia finds her Pepa before the mafia dudes do...can't wait for the reconciliation *grins*:D
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT.....Um...did i mention i love it :DD
Thanks raven *hugs* xD

[raven_bard]

*shy smile* What praise! Thank you so much for liking this story and my writing. *hugs back* Reconciliation soon...Silvia just needs to find her.

Thanks for reading and commenting.