Romancing the Pain - Part 23

Oct 04, 2009 17:17


Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (lots of violence and swearing)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Howdy y’all! My muse called a truce. For now. So look! A new chapter so soon! *pats ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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girlechick October 4 2009, 10:01:04 UTC
Just when you think we're getting somewhere, we hit a brick wall!! And not another cliffy!! I know it's necessary, but you're killing me with those things!! Damn that kekse for wanting one! Sounds like she has a cliffy fetish! *snickers*

Fantastic chapter as always raven_bard!

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raven_bard October 4 2009, 10:09:32 UTC
*laughs* Sorry, Chick. Just hang in there ok?

Actually Kekse was complaining bout the cliffies too...I just twisted his words cuz I was feeling evil *grins*

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

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selinakris October 4 2009, 10:33:07 UTC
ARRRGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great update as always though. *you evil woman*

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raven_bard October 4 2009, 12:00:53 UTC
*flinches* What was that?! Were you trying to imitate Xena's war cry cuz if you were I gotta tell ya, you didn't exactly hit the right notes. *chuckles*

Sorry for the frustration...it'll all come full circle soon. Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

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mmm_kekse October 4 2009, 10:50:27 UTC
awww a chapter for me!!!! *smiles happily and takes a bite from the brownie topped with vanilla ice cream and caramel sauce before dropping it in shock and starts to cough while trying to dodge the apple cores* ...you are evil!! LMFAO I begged for the cliffhanger???!!! okay *crosses arms and turns away* not gonna say anything about this chapter and make this my shortest comment ever! (would be what everyone else said anyway about how hot Silvia is and yay dead mafia guys and yay almost reunion and stuff.) god you are so begging for that asskicking. man great I even dropped the brownie and now there's caramel sauce and ice cream everywhere. good thing this is your journal. I'm so not gonna clean that up. oh and Italian and Spanish is totally one language! No? Si! *kicks at all the apple cores* wanted no cliffy. stop throwing stuff. except maybe money and food I'm okay with that. but tasty food. not already eaten food. not this *kicks at them again* .... hey if I say I want a cliffy in the next chapter you gonna twist my words again and ( ... )

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raven_bard October 4 2009, 11:59:12 UTC
Wait, wait, wait. I dedicate a chapter to you and you're sulking?! *gaps* You ungrateful lil....*whistles* Here boy...come and attack Kekse! *big husky with electric blue eyes bounces over and snarls* Now, Kek, you don't want me to let go of Gadget's collar now woulda ya? Oh you haven't been introduced...he's my new virtual puppy. *laughs*

Aaand Gadget cleaned up the mess you made *hands you an ice cream cone topped with caramel and chocolate ice cream with honeycomb bits* Don't drop that one. I think within that messy jumble of a comment you still enjoyed the chapter *grins* So thanks! And next update will have to wait...my muse bolted again. Probably in cahoots with my brain whom I forced into helping me do my latest uni assessment. It was not happy. Downright pissed if you asked me. *shrugs*

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mmm_kekse October 4 2009, 13:08:03 UTC
you dedicated it to me so you could get people to throw stuff at me! of course I'm sulking. you're a meanie! *sticks out tongue* and I'm not afraid of your virtual puppy! cause Gadget is so pretty!! when did you get him? and how'd you teach him to clean your journal? :D
and yes I did enjoy it very much! there was so much killing and action and Silvia about to lose control it was fun! <3 but I'm not telling you 'cause you're mean. even your brain and your muse think that your mean that's why they took off! only a matter of time till Gadgy will see that too. ... buuut we all love you anyway *nods* just not right now. 'cause sulking is fun and I wanna continue for a few more minutes *sticks out tongue again which you can't see because I think I'm still standing with my back to you right? but damn I want that ice cream cone so I think I better face you or I'll drop it too trying to grab it backwards* okay *sighs and turns* I loved the chapter and I loved that it was dedicated to me. thank you so much! really! and even avoiding flying ( ... )

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raven_bard October 4 2009, 13:26:18 UTC
*snickers* I decided that today was the day to add some responsibility to my very irresponsible life. Soo puppy it was. Plus I'm indulging in a childhood dream. Mama never let me have pets save for this bowl of goldfish that was only given to us cuz the neighbors moved away. When I asked for a pet...a puppy precisely she would just say "when I live with three animals already? You've GOT to be kidding." *rolls eyes* You gotta love my mama...she's not one to mince her words.

Ain't Gadget gorgeous? Pure husky...always loved huskies. He cleans my journal...well he's got a bottomless pit for a stomach so it's not that hard. *chuckles*

Well aside from teasing you with the cliffy...I really did dedicate the chapter to you cuz you read and write awesome comments. So c'mere! *grabs you for a hug* Truce? *grins*

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elisa_trapt October 4 2009, 14:33:00 UTC
Still loving it, raven!! And some Kick-ass!Silvia to boot - what could be better???

Though I was hoping that they would find each other in the tunnels, they weren't supposed to get themselves SHOT! *shakes head* This is NOT going as I planned. Hmmm? What? What do you mean, this isn't my story?! Nonsense! Of course it -...um, well, so...*smiles weakly* maybe not. Okay, I'll sit here quietly. But if you keep abusing these poor women and bloodying them up, I may be forced to hijack the whole thing! So to be clear...next chapter, Silvia and Pepa are fine, alive, NOT shot, and getting out of the tunnels and to a hospital and everyone lives happily ever after. Right? Right???

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raven_bard October 5 2009, 00:59:42 UTC
Shot? Who's getting shot? *looks around...sly grin* I doubt anybody's getting shot...not badly anyway. And please, feel free to hijack the story. Go right ahead cuz I most probably won't get to work on the next chapter til sometime midweek. RL and all. *smiles*

There will be a happy ending...soon. *laughs*

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

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junebuggy01 October 4 2009, 15:06:08 UTC
Kekse is a cliffhanger loving DOUCHE! And I love 'em for that! This was sooooooooooooooo awesome!!! (Was that enough o's? Cuz you deserve a bajillion of them!) I loved it! Silvia was so kickass! Sexy kick ass. And the part where she knocked out Paco made me laugh. That being said... If you have my Pelirroja shot in the stomach where she dies crying in the arms of the sexiest brunette in the world who can't exactly sing that great, I'll... I'll... I'll... hold Kekse hostage! Yeah... Wait... that wouldn't really torture you. But it would still be super fun... But I'll do something heinous to you. Maybe leave a longwinded pointless comment in your comment section of this chapter! *Nods*

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mmm_kekse October 4 2009, 16:52:00 UTC
I'd be an awesome hostage *nods proudly*

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raven_bard October 5 2009, 01:02:25 UTC
Hello my gorgeous wife. Why so perky you ask? I woke up from the niiiiicest dream. *smirks*

Aww don't bash Kek...he's a sweetie. And he and my new puppy seem to be getting along.

And nobody's getting shot! *rolls eyes* Y'all think I'm one big meanie ogre...hmm in that case maybe I SHOULD do something totally evil and unexpected. *evil laugh* And darlin' you can post comments all you want..nothing from you is ever pointless so that's not much of a threat. *grins*

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junebuggy01 October 5 2009, 06:38:50 UTC
Yeah? *Smiles* What exactly about? Leaving me hanging with a food fetish left unsatisfied? *Snorts*

He knows he's a douche. Glad to see he's getting along with your puppy!

I don't think that you're a meanie, Hunny bunny. I don't. I just think you like to torture us that's all. *Smiles*

Oh and... um... when I think of a good threat... I'll... you'll be so sorry! I used the exclamation mark to show you how sorry I'll make you. ooooh, threatening huh?

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