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The Secret Diary of Silvia Castro - Topic: Working Late

Oct 18, 2009 22:00

Title: The Secret Diary of Silvia Castro

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: What if Silvia kept a diary...of ALL her sexual exploits with Pepa?

A/N: I haven’t slept in 48 hours. Don’t ask why, y’all already know. *mutters darkly* I haven’t eaten a cookie since Tuesday. Combine that with my workload…let’s just say I’m VERY cranky. ( Read more... )

fanfiction, the secret diary of silvia castro, pepa/silvia

Comments 34

swiftlyreloaded October 18 2009, 14:58:27 UTC

REALLY HOT! love how Silvia takes Montoyas presence as a challenge to GIVE Pepa her best! I hope your asleep now friend. But if not MayBe some warm milk & lil saranade ....rock a by raven in the tree top when the wind blows the cradle will rock when the bow breaks the cradle will fall down will come raven cradle & all. Now you have me picturing Pepa's revenge..mmm now get to sleep & dream of what Pepa could do to "pay back" La pelirroja.

raven_bard October 19 2009, 11:06:54 UTC

*smiles sleepily* Nice lullaby..albeit a creepy one. I always thought that singing kids a lullaby bout a baby falling outta its cradle was a lil...psychologically damaging? *chuckles*

I did get some sleep thanks. Not much but it was better than nothing. I don't look like a zombie with twin black eyes...that's a good sign.

Oh and thanks for reading...not sure if there'll be a payback but I could try to think of something...in a few weeks. :-)

girlechick October 18 2009, 15:57:43 UTC

*Wipes sweat from brow* Jeez Raven that was gooooooooooooooood! Lol!
I like kinky Silvia, she's the best!
I hope you get a good night's sleep. Don't let the bed bugs bite.

raven_bard October 19 2009, 11:08:30 UTC

Another strange thing parents say to their kids: "don't let the bed bugs bite." Don't parents normally WANT their kids to go to bed? What if the kid was severely scared of bugs? They'd never get to sleep!

Regarding the story, yes, kinky Silvia is really fun to write. I'm glad you enjoyed this update. :-) And ya...I did manage a few hours of shut eye, thanks.

slayergirl13 October 18 2009, 16:12:53 UTC

ok that was hot, whew I mean hot! Ok so I was logging on to reread one of your older fics and I find a new one waiting, perfect! This was excellent and I can't wait for more to come ;)

raven_bard October 19 2009, 11:08:50 UTC

*smiles* Thanks

foot_print_1 October 18 2009, 16:42:04 UTC

Why couldn’t this happen on the show?
They are so hot together! I love the way you imagine them doing the Nasty-Nasty...

raven_bard October 19 2009, 11:10:00 UTC

This? On the show? It is kinda something that would happen in LHDP huh? Like when Montoya and Silvia were fooling around in the briefing room and DL walked in. Well, glad you liked this update. These two love their public sex, that's for sure.

foot_print_1 October 19 2009, 12:53:05 UTC

I know something like this happened in LHDP, just sayin it wasn't as hot as your version. ;) your version has Pepa, and really hot sex.
Silvia DID fooled around in the briefing room with Montoya before, I just seem to forget that.. on purpose. XD

god I love kinky Silvia!! bigmarianfan October 18 2009, 20:09:25 UTC

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh another NC-17 fiction whoooooooop, I wasn't getting desperate or anything...well maybe a little! Great job x

Re: god I love kinky Silvia!! raven_bard October 19 2009, 11:10:44 UTC

Y'all are addicted to sex via stories...there should be some support group for this addiction. Lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting.