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The Secret Diary of Silvia Castro - Topic: Fighting in the Rain

Nov 02, 2009 23:25

Title: The Secret Diary of Silvia Castro

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: What if Silvia kept a diary...of ALL her sexual exploits with Pepa?

A/N: This is dedicated to Juney cuz I shot my mouth off around her...again. *rolls eyes* She also picked this diary topic soo if you don’t like it, throw the whatever you’re throwing at her ( Read more... )

fanfiction, the secret diary of silvia castro, pepa/silvia

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vickiheartpepsi November 3 2009, 04:54:37 UTC

Wow.

raven_bard November 3 2009, 10:24:45 UTC

*chuckles* Thanks

angie005 November 3 2009, 06:19:36 UTC

um.... I just got really dizzy and feverish. In fact, I'm speechless. That entry was beyond erotic.

The image of Silvia trapping Pepa against a wall, with the rain drizzling on top of them, where the thunder is relentlessly pounding their senses but they are still lost within each other. Nothing is more erotic than being in mother nature's worst mood while perform the most arousal act of humanity.

I caught the PepSi Flu and don't want the antidote!!

raven_bard November 3 2009, 10:26:04 UTC

*giggles* PepSi flu? PepSi fever!!! *bounces* I think we've all got it. Everyone is always screaming for PepSi smut. Best thing bout this "sickness"? There's no cure!!! *laughs*

Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed so much. *grins*

pantherwalks November 3 2009, 10:52:45 UTC

H-O-L-Y! Definitely Fighting in the rain is way better than Singing in the rain *Nods*.

You just gotta love this two, specially an angry Pelirroja.
Fight-tastic, Raven :D

raven_bard November 4 2009, 03:07:49 UTC

*sings* I'm fiiiighting in the rain..." *chuckles*

Glad you liked the update. And yes, angry Silvia is a hot Silvia!!

slayergirl13 November 3 2009, 10:58:17 UTC

That was awesome. I've always loved the rain and thought it was sexy in a way, you sure proved it with that. Thanks for never disappointing.

Looking forward to more ;)

raven_bard November 4 2009, 03:09:17 UTC

I'm not a fan of the rain *pulls face* But if Silvia pulled me out to have hot angry sex then I'm sooo there. *laughs*

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

junebuggy01 November 3 2009, 13:02:23 UTC

OMIGOD! That was hot! Like... hotter than... than... the hottest stuff ever! Yeah!... *sighs* That sucked, but I can't think. And hey, so, should I just throw my "I love you, Raven!" Panties at me then? I don't know what use I'd get out of them, but... that's all I wanna throw. :D

As for the other part of your A/N... You're such a fucking tease! I swear to god, I am gonna purchase a ticket to Australia, (Do you think the airlines will accept bits of string?) find you, and assist you in wearing the batteries out on your newly acquired goodies!

raven_bard November 4 2009, 03:14:08 UTC

You have I love you, Raven panties? *giggles* Soo...glad you chose this topic then huh? I think from all the comments I'm starting to get a hang of writing smut. *grins*

"You're such a fucking tease!" ~ Me? A Tease? Pfft...surely you jest! All I asked was what you wanted me to suck. *smirks* You weren't exactly giving me proper instructions there. *chortles* And no, sorry, babe. Airlines want real money, not string. Besides you can't come to Aus...I'm leavin the island on Sunday. Vacation!!!! *bounces*

junebuggy01 November 5 2009, 01:53:34 UTC

*Nods* I do! They have your icon and everything! xD And of course I am! Of course I'm ecstatic that I got to choose the topic... You should let me do that more often! *Smiles* No? Probably not... What if I promise not to emotionally blackmail you any more? xD

I don't even know what jest means! You need proper instructions to know what I want you to suck? *Bites lip* Hmmm? *Licks my lips while gripping your hips* Suck an egg, Raven! Suck an egg!

Oh, *Claps for you* YAY for vacations. I hope it's fun! *Bounces with you*

raven_bard November 5 2009, 08:34:03 UTC

Jest = joke, kid etc. Pfft...you're not foolin' me with that dumb blond routine, babe.

Suck an egg huh? *pulls away from you, saunters to the kitchen and plucks out an egg.* This egg? *brings it to my moist lips, giving it a gentle kiss before my tongue pokes out delicately, licking the top of the shell then the entire length of the egg....smirks* Well darlin', that egg got more action then you did. I think I'll go make an omelet now. Ok that was a lie...I'm gonna get my housemate to make me an omelet.

Weeell...I could let you pick a topic...but then again you've been a bad girl so no. *laughs*

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