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Come Back to Me - Part 2

Jul 17, 2009 15:14

Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 (for now)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: Enjoy you guys. I don't want to drag this story out for too long but then again, it's such a delicate situation. Leaving out too many details kinda kills the point of the story.

Pepa paced up and down the hospital hallway. Up ( Read more... )

fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

Comments 18

xejanfan July 17 2009, 05:36:49 UTC

oh, youre such a meanie! here i was about to rave about pacing!pepa and including some of the other characters, when BAM! major effing cliffhanger! *shaking head* *hiding sly grin* give me more, please!

(don't mind that stuff i just said, that's just the grief talking. i love your fics! besitos! )

raven_bard July 17 2009, 05:55:41 UTC

Lo siento! But hey a cliffhanger here and there keeps y'all on your toes. *grins* More soon I promise. And please, feel free to rant and rave. We all need to vent somehow. :-D

lenageek July 17 2009, 06:07:19 UTC

Guh! I read part one about four times today and was very happy to see part two - until that cliffhanger! :O Please keep writing, I can't wait to see how it goes. I love all the fan's fanfic alternate versions so far...

raven_bard July 17 2009, 10:14:41 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting! Sorry about the cliffhanger...really I am. But I just had to get my thoughts together on what I was gonna get the doctor to say. I have little to no medical knowledge so I'm gonna have to keep it vague but not make it sound dumb.

palex_4_ever July 17 2009, 06:11:05 UTC

I was holding my breath waiting for what the doctor was going to say; then nothing! Mean cliffhanger!! I need to know what happens! Please!

raven_bard July 17 2009, 10:15:29 UTC

Sorry, sorry! Ok, ok no more cliffhangers for you guys..maybe. But thanks for reading!

mmm_kekse July 17 2009, 07:18:15 UTC

as much as it hurts to see (or read) Pepa that helpless and powerless and just broken... as much did I love this part to pieces. <3 but the cliffhanger is just mean :( lol more please! soon! xD <3

raven_bard July 17 2009, 10:16:52 UTC

Well you know what they say; when you hit rock bottom, the only way left is up. Pepa will bob back up to the surface soon. Just bear with me for another few chapters.Thanks for reading.

rocky_fan July 17 2009, 07:37:55 UTC

No,no,no,no,no,no,no,no...!!

You can´t leave us there, that´s cruel!!!

But I loved how you wrote Pepa´s feelings and I´m dying for the next part!

raven_bard July 17 2009, 10:18:21 UTC

*hugs* Gods I'm so sorry. I'll try to keep cliffhangers to a minimum. If it makes you feel better I'm working on part 3. Boy is my muse on overdrive...it's a reaction to the damn finale. Idiot producers. Go rot in hell!