Come Back To Me - Part 3

Jul 18, 2009 00:32


Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 (for now)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: I have little to no knowledge of medical technicalities so I kept it all simple and vague. And there's no cliffhanger, as promised. *grins* Enjoy.

COME BACK TO ME - Part 3

Pepa knew the doctor was talking. His lips were ( Read more... )

fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

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junebuggy01 July 17 2009, 14:54:20 UTC
Brilliantly awesome! The descriptions were great and I'm glad there's no cliffhanger! :DD I love the way you write. maybe you should get a nobel peace prize! J/K

But seriously love it, can't wait for the next one

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raven_bard July 17 2009, 14:59:24 UTC
*chuckles* Thanks for reading. I can't believe people are actually keeping up with the story though. When I re-read it, it sounds like ranting to me. Oh well but if y'all like it, I'll keep going. :-)

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junebuggy01 July 17 2009, 15:12:33 UTC
We all need a good rant in written form! And yes, you better keep going or I'll... I'll... do something, that I can't quite think of yet... Yeah, that's right!

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raven_bard July 17 2009, 15:36:39 UTC
ROFL! "I quiver with fear" - quote Scar from The Lion King. I've retreated to watching Disney movies and writing this fic. *shrugs* They are both comforting. Hehe.

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rocky_fan July 17 2009, 15:12:50 UTC
I love this fic, it was really realistic how you discribed Pepa´s feeling, really well writen!

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raven_bard July 17 2009, 15:15:07 UTC
*blush* Thank you for your comments. And thank you for continuing to read.

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anonymous1991 July 17 2009, 15:30:51 UTC
Great and strong chapter!!!

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raven_bard July 17 2009, 15:33:12 UTC
Thank you! :-D

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mmm_kekse July 17 2009, 15:31:11 UTC
that was great! and awesome and everything! it was so sad when Pepa put away that dress... I loved that bit <3 ( why am I loving all the sad parts? twisted.. my mind is so broken right now)
but you really have to keep going. I love it and it's wonderful and your story is helping so much right now <3

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raven_bard July 17 2009, 15:34:17 UTC
Pepa putting away her wedding dress was one of my favorite parts to write. I could totally see her doing it with that abject look of intense concentration on her face. Thank you for reading. You guys really rock. :-)

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mmm_kekse July 17 2009, 15:57:11 UTC
yeah I can absolutely picture her doing that and while reading it it just seemed like it was the most important thing in that moment for her. like... this desperate attempt to save the day and the wedding somehow. <3 and thank you for writing!

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lenageek July 17 2009, 15:50:22 UTC
[applauds] Yay, I was so happy to see pt. 3 posted this morning! Poor Pepa, I really feel for her! Please keep going, I'm certainly enjoying fan's versions better than the actual episode!

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raven_bard July 17 2009, 15:54:29 UTC
Yeah I'm really putting Pepa through the wringer. Will give her all the hugs and kisses she needs soon. Thanks for reading!

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