Come Back to Me - Part 7.2

Jul 22, 2009 22:36


Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 (for now)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

COME BACK TO ME - Part 7.2

“I can’t Pepa!” Silvia cried out, staring at the water fearfully. It loomed in front of her like an ominous gaping hole, waiting to suck her in and drown her. Silvia bit her lip, tears threatening to fill ( Read more... )

fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

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mmm_kekse July 22 2009, 19:12:05 UTC
there were so many bits that had me near (happy) tears <3 xD
and that was such a sweet memory and you wrote it so beautifully <3
and I totally wouldn't mind if you had to do the next part in three posts xD

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raven_bard July 23 2009, 02:49:25 UTC
Oh happy tears are ok. Bored tears no. Thank you for your sweet comments. I'm glad everyone seems to still enjoy the story. I know I can get a lil wordy sometimes. ;-)

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melbell17 July 22 2009, 23:56:48 UTC
lol,dont cut it down!!! I love it long. This story is fantastic.

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raven_bard July 23 2009, 02:49:36 UTC
Thank you!

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lovelyafterglow July 23 2009, 02:06:22 UTC
So cute. I love the idea of Pepa being so protective and patient with Silvia, even when they were younger.

Also, about the Marian beach pics...is it just me or does she totally look like a mermaid? (She's like a sexy, topless Ariel! I swear.)

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raven_bard July 23 2009, 02:51:59 UTC
*thud* Thank you GOD! I'm so glad I wasn't the only one thinking that. With Marian's red hair, she was totally a living breathing Ariel. Of course after I thought that I cringed realizing that I had just compared a topless woman to a Disney character. *facepalm* Oh my mind's a mess.

Thanks for liking the childhood memory. I was trying to make it as sweet as possible without giving everyone a sugar overdose.

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lovelyafterglow July 23 2009, 03:10:58 UTC
Haha! I knew there had to be someone else who thought like me!

I saw the pics and was like, "When's it her turn? Wouldn't she love, love to explore that world up above? Out of the sea...wish she could be...part of this wooooorld"

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raven_bard July 23 2009, 03:29:59 UTC
Or down below *whistles innocently*, *sly grin*

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yul1vk July 23 2009, 07:12:00 UTC
awwwwwww i love this and how cute was that story :)

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raven_bard July 23 2009, 07:39:00 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! :-)

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sia_9 July 25 2009, 02:49:53 UTC
i love imagining them young and having all that time ahead of them...because you know that she, grrr dies. it's still hard to accept. but yes back to your writing i wish you did write for lhdp!

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raven_bard July 25 2009, 02:57:20 UTC
Yeah a young Pepa and Silvia. So easy to imagine. *grins* And no, no, no. Let's all live in denial about Silvia dying. I'm totally in denial land until I see what happens next season. Here's hoping this worldwide campaign to save a beloved character and couple actually works.

Thanks for reading!

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