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Come Back to Me - Part 8

Jul 23, 2009 23:58

Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: MA (Mature Audiences) for a bit of swearing and kissing

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: This one's kinda filler but given their circumstance also kinda necessary. Let me know what you think. And thanks for all your kind support and taking the time to comment after you read

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fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

Comments 52

junebuggy01 July 23 2009, 14:17:23 UTC

God, your story just keeps getting better and better! I love it! And there was tongue stuff! Lol, just kidding, but seriously awesome chapter can't wait for the next one. :D

raven_bard July 23 2009, 14:26:19 UTC

*giggles* Yes there was. Hence the MA rating. Thanks for your comments. ;-)

extessie July 23 2009, 14:18:47 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwww *melts*
I love this story. It may be fiction, but it feels real. I mean, this could've...SHOULD'VE happened on the show.
I really like your style of writing. The emotions from both Pepa and Silvia are very well written.
Hope to see more of this story soon! Can't get enough of it =]

raven_bard July 23 2009, 14:28:46 UTC

Aww thanks so much! Your comments along with everyone else's are helping me to continue writing this story. I'm glad I get to share my version of what happened post season finale with you guys. And again, thank you for commenting. :-)

anonymous1991 July 23 2009, 14:34:46 UTC

AWWWWWW how cute...Ok I'm not a pushy person but MORE SOON PLEASE!

raven_bard July 24 2009, 02:55:43 UTC

Thanks! More soon, I promise. ;-)

xejanfan July 23 2009, 15:08:08 UTC

this is supposed to be your version of filler? uh, pardon me for saying but this bit contains better written emotion than some full-out stories i've read! sadly, including my own feeble attempts! so good job, and yipee! they got to make out a little! *slowly reaching for designated poking stick* don't make me do it... can i trust you to continue without the threat of a firm poking? i hope so, cuz i want more of this story soon please! see, now you have to cuz i said please! *smirk*

raven_bard July 24 2009, 02:57:25 UTC

Hey now, *rears back* Easy with the poking stick, darlin'. Wouldn't want you to hurt yourself. *chuckles* Ok, ok. I get it. More soon. I can't keep writing new chapters whilst I'm in lectures though. Hmm..maybe another trip to the beach is in order.

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raven_bard July 24 2009, 02:58:08 UTC

I hope to gods they fix their mess. Seriously. But until then, I'm glad to help ease the ache a little. Thanks for reading and the comment. :-)