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raven_bard

Come Back to Me - Part 11

Jul 28, 2009 19:40

Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 Yeah right. Of course, it’s NC-17

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: I dedicate this chapter to xejanfan cuz 1: she wanted to go ring shopping for me *winks* , 2: she begged oh so prettily AND 3: cuz the woman goes wakeboarding. That’s just hot! *chuckles* I suppose ( Read more... )

fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

Comments 62

mmm_kekse July 28 2009, 18:36:07 UTC

so I had this horrible night and this exhausting day and... I really don't care anymore 'cause that was no mind-numbingly hot!
I .... damn... my brain stopped working ... I ... seriously I totally forgot what I was about to say.... (hope thats 'cause of your story and not something I should worry about)
thank you for your amazing smut! xD <333
(and it took me almost 15 minutes to write this lol ... I should try a cold shower)

raven_bard July 29 2009, 00:29:18 UTC

*giggles* more cold showers? You poor thing. Well I'm glad I got to alleviate some of your bad day and night. Hope things are better and thanks for the comment!

Good lord!!! pepsiaddict37 July 28 2009, 18:41:14 UTC

Now thats a show i want to see. You got the gift!!! I would love to be pepa in that scenario...only in my dreams, but thats what dreams are for....bravo, great job...i am having hotflashes...now i know i have alot of work to do to improve my writing. i was to embarrased to write like that, i guess i need a smut lesson. oh well, it was only my first try right? looking forward to your continued story.

Re: Good lord!!! raven_bard July 29 2009, 00:31:04 UTC

You and the rest of us, hun. But I think this is a lil too hardcore even for primetime Spanish TV. And you can totally write smut. This is like my...3rd time only.

av8rwinn July 28 2009, 21:36:09 UTC

I like. I must learn from master raven_bard and junebuggy, smut masters.

raven_bard July 29 2009, 00:31:44 UTC

Tsk. Don't underestimate yourself. You wrote great smut!

selinakris July 28 2009, 21:36:50 UTC

wow it's weird, I can't stand up, think i'm gonna have to read these while IN the shower. just to be safe *already ran out of ice*
you are truely talented, keep em *cough* comin *cough* lol.

raven_bard July 29 2009, 00:33:27 UTC

*snickers* Can't stand up? Oh dear...well don't read this in the shower. That involves bringing in your laptop! Laptop and water..bad combo.

"keep em *cough* comin *cough*" - smooth...very smooth *raises eyebrow*

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raven_bard July 29 2009, 00:34:11 UTC

Get up! *looks around in horror* No bowing. Bowing bad! And don't give up. Keep writing! Your stuff is great!!