Come Back to Me - Part 12

[raven_bard]

Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: NC-17 for you know what and language

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year

A/N: I wasn’t gonna do another smut chapter but I made a promise to junebug to give her something…sweet. So I dedicate this chapter to junebug. *winks and blows kiss* Enjoy babe. Hope the rest of you guys enjoy

Comments

[lenageek]

Unwashed socks? Are you offering to do laundry as well as get us all hot and bothered with your lovely smut? ;D It's after midnight here and I was so happy to see this pop up on my friends page (tho what does that say about me? Hee hee!)

Okay, I laughed my ass off and slapped my desk gleefully at the pelvic exam line! Go Silvia! Aaannnd at least Pepa was pretty much done before they were so rudely interrupted again! That doctor is so cool - I'd give him a high five! Love the line of Silvia trying not to show how that homophobic nurse's comments hurt her - Pepa woulda given the nurse hell for that if she'd been, ahem, more coherent.

Can't wait for more. How long are you planning to continue this story? *cough*hopefully indefinitely*cough*

[raven_bard]

Well I was trying to be creative...people throw rotten vegetables and fruits when they are displeased..I thought maybe y'all might want a change of pace. *winks*

I was THIS close to leaving Pepa high and dry...well high anyway. *clamps hand over mouth to stifle laughter* But I decided to give em a break. Ooh I'm glad you liked that line. I thought it was funny too. Yeah, Pepa would have tore into that nurse if she had had more energy but Silvia kinda wore her out. Hehe.

How long am I gonna continue? *wicked grin* I can't answer that. :-D

[lenageek]

I was THIS close to leaving Pepa high and dry...well high anyway.

Thanks for not doing so - poor Pepa has had enough frustration! ;D

How long am I gonna continue? *wicked grin* I can't answer that. :-D

This is me pouting - :{ Pleeaaase keep writing! I'll do your laundry!

[raven_bard]

Yikes! *covers eyes* No pouting! No pouting! I'm such a sucker for pouts. *keeps eyes closed* Ah I wished you'd said that this morning...damn this time difference. Sorry my laundry is all done and folded. *grins*

[raven_bard]

Yes...I can see your lil fetish via your icon. *sly grin* I'm glad you got a kick outta this chapter. Thanks for commenting! :-)

[raven_bard]

I agree. That garage scene took the cake, the icing, the crumbs and plates. I was completely in need of a drool napkin. *winks*

[junebuggy01]

I love this! I love you for writing this! I love you!!! Thank you Raven! I feel all... warm inside *smirks* You fantastically awesomely gifted writer of everything that is awesome! I'm tired, sorry if this doesn't make sense. :D
But, Besos!

[raven_bard]

Lol. No it made sense. *winks* Thanks for enjoying it so. You're sleepy? You should get some shut eye. Rock a bye junebug on the tree top...when the wind blows....

[junebuggy01]

Lol!... You have a beautiful singing voice... Calming...

[raven_bard]

ROFL! *clutches sides whilst laughing hysterically* I have the WORST singing voice ever! I'm surprised your windows haven't cracked and shattered. *snickers* Singing is not my forte....I feel sorry for my shower head for having to listen to my gawds awful screeching everyday when I shower. *chuckles*

[booglebee]

I really like Silvia the tease! She is awesome. Also the fact that anyone could have walked in (which they did haha) made it that much more exciting. Ooo and i love this part:

"When her eyes reached the compromising position of Silvia’s hand, her eyes turned to slits. “What are you doing?” A stupid question....
...“Giving my wife a pelvic exam,” Silvia drolled.....“Do we have a problem?”" LOL!

thanks!

[raven_bard]

*chuckles* Sweet. At least my crazy sense of humor isn't lost on you guys. *breathes sigh of relief*

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

[xejanfan]

it's 5:30 am and i'm STILL late to the party! argh! oh well, that doesn't change the fact that i freakin' loved this update! teasing smug sexy unrepentant silvia is probably my favorite silvia! whining stuttering dumb-with-lust-and-love pepa is pretty swell too

[raven_bard]

What are these parties you keep going to? *chuckles* You can't keep sifting back and forth between these updates and the party. Party first! Party hard!

Aww so you DO have a tender side. It's not all just "wham bam thank you mam" with you. *strokes chin thoughtfully* I think I like it. *winks* And yes, I love the ring...thank you. *blows kiss*

[xejanfan]

gotta admit, hanging out w/ my nieces at the beach yesterday was pretty mush-inducing! those two little girls (4yrs and 2yrs) are my light, makes me hope that things will get better for them in the future; sentimental crap like that. my cousin and my roommate keep telling me i should have kids because i'm great with them but... i dunno about that one! when the school year starts again, i'll have 200 teenagers, so i'm thinking no kids at home is a GOOD... no GREAT thing!

so in closing, your fics and the wonderful women who comment on them are the party i'm always late to because of the time zone thing (i have sydney's time programmed into my phone now so i know what time it is in australia! this way i have an idea if you may post/respond or not! right now it's 2:15am, so i won't check for responses til later!) thanks again for sharing your wonderful writing with us. you rule at tender, you rule at smut, you rule at everything! besitos!

[raven_bard]

I love kids. We get along great...mostly cuz I act like em. *grins* I have this baby cousin who drives everyone including me nuts cuz she's just waaaaay too demanding but every time she turns a smile at me, I'm ready to jump off the nearest building if she asks. *shakes head*

Ah to the party thing....sorry it was late last night. I was getting real sleepy. Yeah the time difference...a pain in everybody's asses. You have Sydney's time programed on your cell? *blushes* I'm totally flattered. *blows kiss*