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Romancing the Pain - Part 4

Aug 12, 2009 18:29

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: M (for language)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: This chapter's dedicated to Jem *winks* Thanks for the wine and back rub, honey! It's nice to come back from ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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lenageek August 12 2009, 08:51:12 UTC

Wow - again, I am speechless at your writing skills! It was great to see this chapter from DLs POV - yay for DL coming in to try and help the girls! (I'd give him a high five if the situation weren't so dire!) Tho, I'm looking for a good, stern talking to from father to daughter - someone's gotta snap Silvia out of it. If not her shaking, crying wife, then who?! I actually really loved this chapter since it shows that Pepa and Silvia's family see what is happening and are trying to intervene. I can just see Silvia's cold emotionless face tho and it makes me shudder! Damn, what's gonna happen next?

Brilliant as always raven_bard!

raven_bard August 12 2009, 10:20:03 UTC

Whoa that was some fast reading and commenting there! *blinks in shock*

Thanks for your awesome compliments *winks* Yeah I'm roping in the family to help pull these two gals out of whatever hells I've thrown them into. Even I'm getting scared at how Silvia's diminishing into this....shell. I don't even see a cold emotionless face; I see a blank one. Empty. Like there's nothing behind that face. *shivers*

Don't know what's gonna happen next...I'm as clueless as the next reader. But thanks for reading!

lenageek August 12 2009, 15:06:50 UTC

Whoa that was some fast reading and commenting there! *blinks in shock*

Hee hee - I was up in the wee hours of the morning working on Pepsi icons again! Damn things make me sleep deprived, unfortunately! :D

Don't know what's gonna happen next...I'm as clueless as the next reader.

But...but...you're the writer! Shouldn't you have some clue?! J/K, can't wait to see what you come up with!

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raven_bard August 12 2009, 10:22:56 UTC

*shuffles feet, blushing* Thank you. Yes, DL may be a gruff, stern man but underneath it all he would walk to the ends of the earth for the ones he loves.

Yeah I know Pepa's normally the strong one but I think deep down she's a very emotional person and after something so tragic (like their horrible wedding) I think this side of her would come out in full force. That said, Silvia is on the surface a more emotionally open person so she would do the reverse and shut down cuz too many emotions can render a person crazy.

Thanks for reading and commenting btw.. :-)

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raven_bard August 12 2009, 10:26:21 UTC

You READ random's recap of ep 104? *grabs you in a bear hug* Gods you're brave. I skimmed through it. I just couldn't muster up the courage to read it properly...every time I saw a picture of Silvia lying there *shudders*

That said, no, no, no. We are NOT going to condone Pepa's drinking. Now if I can find a way to yank these two girls outta the pits of despair....

Thanks for reading though *hands you a candy bar* Even though it was obviously painful for you to do so.

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raven_bard August 12 2009, 10:46:49 UTC

Yeah that's the main reason why I refused to really read the recap. I fell apart watching the episode in Spanish alone. Can you just imagine getting the intimate details of the play by play of each uttered word in English? *shakes head* I totally cannot afford to fall to pieces right now and I know that had I read it, I would have just spent the rest of the night sobbing.

It may be a TV show but their portrayal of their relationship is too strikingly real. We are affected by it cuz we can relate to it. But I agree, when I watched the ep and cried for what seemed like hours, somewhere in the back of my mind I was like "this is nuts, why the hell are you reacting like that to a fictional character?! Pull yourself together!"

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girlechick August 12 2009, 10:03:27 UTC

omfg!! that was so good! you've only just posted more fanfic, and already i'm craving for the next installement!

raven_bard August 12 2009, 10:27:43 UTC

*chuckles* Hiya! Thanks for your comment! Next installment will probably be this weekend...hopefully. If I can make a dent in my homework for next week. :-)

selinakris August 12 2009, 11:03:58 UTC

That was utter brilliance. It's like you reached inside my chest and literally ripped my heart out... *peers inside empty hole* That was like UBER angst especially with Sylvia being the cold one. I saw Raven's recap of 104 was up last night but have'nt read it yet, cos I wanted happieness, so read the other updates first. I think I shot myself in the foot, cos 1st yours now raven's...*gulp*

raven_bard August 12 2009, 11:13:27 UTC

*bandages up the empty wound...but keeps the still beating heart and places it next to smutfest 09' winner trophy* Thanks for the lil souvenir! *wicked laugh*

Thanks for reading and commenting. But I think you meant RANDOM'S recaps...lol. I couldn't do those recaps to save my life! But like I told muero I couldn't read the recap...I'm too much of a chickenshit to do so.

selinakris August 12 2009, 11:43:14 UTC

durrr.. yep see the heart is gone and the brain is fried. soz for the brain fart. I haven't read RANDOM'S recap yet. I can't bring myself to go there every time I stare at it I freeze. *shakes head at own patheticness* I don't think you will be the only one not wanting to read it.