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raven_bard

Romancing the Pain - Part 5

Aug 14, 2009 14:32

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Ok I think this is going to be the last update til Monday because my internet has RIP'd at home. And it's really a ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

Comments 31

lenageek August 14 2009, 04:51:25 UTC

Ooh, more family intervention therapy - this is gonna be good! I can't wait to see where Sara takes Silvia. Nice to see some faint cracks in her armor coming - I hope?! Guh, can't take this angst too much longer - need some smut eventually to fill in the hole you've made in my heart reading this story!

I love that DL is treating Pepa like a daughter and think it's endearing that she's not used to it yet - I'd love to see more interaction between the two - a scene at the beach maybe?

Hey would it help if I kicked your 'puter? Not that it works any better on my modem when my internet goes wanky, but it makes me feel better! ;D

raven_bard August 14 2009, 05:02:07 UTC

I feel like you are my story's lil stalker...you're so fast at reading these! *chuckles*

I can't write anymore smut for now. Seriously the last smut fic I wrote completely drained all my smut imagination away. I'm all smutted out. Lol.

As for my modem, I've kicked it (resulting in a bruised toe), I've taken it apart and fiddled with its insides...and nothing. Not a beep, not a flicker of light. So I've had to resort to going down to McDonalds to use the free net. *shakes head*

But seriously thanks for reading and commenting so fast! I was afraid for a moment for that DL wanting to spend time with Pepa was kinda outta character for him but then again, they've bonded so much since Silvia's second near death experience so it's not as weird I guess. As for further interaction...stay tuned *winks*

lenageek August 14 2009, 05:14:53 UTC

Just call me Speedy Gonzales! Hey, if you're gonna keep writing this well (your so called 'filler' is frakking great writing - better than what I could do!) than I'll enjoy being your stalker! Hee - I think it's funny we always end up online at the same time, across oceans!

I agree, I don't think it's outta character for DL to take in Pepa so much - I enjoy their unlikely pairing and reading about it in fanfic.

Back to icon making - what frakking one was I on? Problem is, I keep coming up with ideas/finding more screengrabs to do icons which is why I haven't posted yet. Listening to all the LHDP music which is the perfect bg music.

raven_bard August 14 2009, 05:27:41 UTC

I used to watch Speedy Gonzales religiously when I was a kid! Damn I loved that lil mouse and his sombrero. Lol.

Yeah despite our time differences we always seem to online together...isn't is awful late on your side of the world? Or awful early?

And I await your icons with bated breath. I love seeing a new one every time you post a comment. *grins*

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musicbuttons August 14 2009, 05:29:13 UTC

**waving my hands** I have an extra modem that you can use!! Ummm....it might take a week to get to you so I'll just wait patiently until Monday for the next update. *grin*

Can't wait to know what plays out for those too....

raven_bard August 14 2009, 06:01:50 UTC

Lol...I called my landlord and yelled at him for a good 5 minutes about the broken modem. Seriously it's like the 4th one that's broken. Makes me wonder where he's getting these modems from *rolls eyes* But thanks for the offer!

Thanks for reading and commenting. :-)

xejanfan August 14 2009, 05:41:05 UTC

hola esposa! this was a good 'filler', glad to see sara taking silvia somewhere mysterious (can't wait to find out where next time!). and oh i squeed so hard when pepa got all smushy about being treated like a daughter! that was so sad and sweet, especially since she's in the loving hands of a father that was the bane of her existence. brings up all my daddy issues about... never mind, not EVEN going to go into it! suffice it to say, pepa finally FINALLY getting the loving father figure she has wanted, lacked and deserved all her life really touched my heart. it made me very happy. and seeing the infinitesimal crack in silvia's wall was a small freakin' miracle. the awkward kiss on the jaw... ergh! so all around great update...

and doesn't your uni have free wireless? at least go to starbuck's if you're gonna hang out and post fanfic! or the nearest public library? c'mon woman, mcdonald's? are you mccrazy? oh well, guess you gotta do whatcha gotta do! te quiero mucho, guapa!

raven_bard August 14 2009, 06:00:24 UTC

Hi baby. Sorry I can't dispense with the endearments. It's like second nature...all your fault. *pokes out tongue*

Yes my uni has free wireless but I don't go into uni unless I have to uni. I have a slight aversion to the academic institutions. *pulls a face* And I don't drink coffee so Starbucks is out...plus there isn't one close to my place. The public library has no free wireless and has a max of 4 computers..which are always used by lil screaming children. Sooo McDonalds it is. I don't eat anything there...I skulk to a corner and sit. Besides...if I go around the afternoon there's this very cute girl at the counter. *winks*

As for that small crack in Silvia's wall...you did read that she built it back up didn't you? *snickers* But I'm glad you enjoyed Pepa's little squirmy moment. The girl is not good at receiving affection unless it's coming from a certain redhead and Silvia's not exactly all touchy feely right now.

xejanfan August 14 2009, 06:10:46 UTC

no no, you can call me baby, i likey i likey! and yes i know that silvia patched the crack (that sounds dirty!) but the fact that she finally showed even the itsiest bitsiest glimmer of ability to feel something other that guilt and pain was enough for me! and i know my fairytale drained all your smutness away (for now anyways, right?), i'm sorry about that! but now that i got my other two smut_fics done, i'm working on a pepsi one for you to enjoy! so when you get reliable modem service back, hopefully it will be done and will bring a little ray of sunshine into your angsty gloomy mean brain. and then maybe you can start letting your pepsi have love back in their lives? besitos mi amor!

xejanfan August 14 2009, 06:11:52 UTC

oh, and stay away from that mcgirl! i got enuff trouble with two of you! *smirks*

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slayergirl13 August 14 2009, 07:50:25 UTC

This is heart wrenchingly beautiful, if that makes sense. It's somewhat bittersweet to read, but you have me hooked and I check everyday for a new chapter.

I love your writing style and you've done an excellent job capturing the girls' personalities. It's painful to imagine my fav tv couple could go through this but you hit there actions and reactions dead on and I think that's what makes it enjoyable.

That's all I just wanted to dote on you a little and thank you for the work you put into these wonderful stories.

raven_bard August 16 2009, 00:44:24 UTC

It makes sense *winks* I understand...the story's completely bittersweet, it's suppose to be.

Thanks for reading and your high praise, you've made me blush but I really appreciate it. :-)

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raven_bard August 16 2009, 00:46:15 UTC

Super DL and his sidekick Sara are swooping down to (try) to save the train wreck that is these two.

Yeah...damn internet. I feel like someone cut off my right arm..it's so annoying. Hence I've invaded my friend's house...well that and the fact that I passed out there after some serious partying/drinking *chuckles*

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. :-)