[Fic] Niou/Yagyuu, birthday

Dec 07, 2009 21:34

Title: Happy birthday
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: Niou/Yagyuu, Rikkai
Warnings / rating: none / G or PG?
A/N: I haven't posted a fic in a long time! But I plan on posting more soon :D This fic is written for the lovely dark_kana , as a belated birthday present ^o^ I'm no good at writing fluffy fic but I figured a birthday fic must not contain ( Read more... )

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dark_kana December 8 2009, 08:26:14 UTC
*squeels ... loudly*
ILY !!! Oh ... So much ♥ THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU *glompstackle*
Niou !!!! *hugs you*
this was amazing! so amazing!!!
I'll leave a decent comment later on when I can type coherent sentences again (and when I have time ... ^_^" Seeing I read this whil working ... *grins*)

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ravenery December 8 2009, 18:47:35 UTC
I LOVE YOU TOO GIRL ♥♥
I'm glad you liked it T////T *was worried* You're very very welcome! <3
Hehe, what do you at work when you're surfing? XDD Just reading fics and comments and such or also watching videos? XDDDDD

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dark_kana December 9 2009, 10:25:20 UTC
You don't have to worry!!! *glomps* You're writing is so good!!! ^^

*guilty look*
I check my mail, read occasionally a fanfic, I write (not that much because we're always busy)
but I never watch videos. (even if I wanted to, I couldn't ... work blocks youtube...)

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ravenery December 11 2009, 18:41:38 UTC
Thank you!! Q///Q You don't know how much this comments means to me ;;

What, that's nothing to feel guilty about XD I mean, when I'm at work I take food and drinks for free because everyone does but ACTUALLY, it's not allowed, so... XD
Ahh, I see x3 It is quite convenient to work on a computer, I think XD *is envious*

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dark_kana December 8 2009, 13:13:53 UTC
Right, here we are again ...
A decent comment this time ...
As I said before, I absolutely love it! Adore it! ♥

Thank you for adding the entire Rikkai team! Yukimura was (as always) amazing! XD

Niou is still in a good temper on his way home; Yagyuu accompanying him might be a reason for it, but he doesn’t wonder, again. Thinking too much he doesn’t want to do, especially not today. WIN !!!! ♥

And another WIN one : The evening ends up being pretty nice, surprisingly, since he does not take the centre stage. It rather feels like another casual day spent with his team for no particular reason, and this is something he can definitely deal with.

You know, I can keep on quoting...
Only when Yagyuu pretends it’s too warm for him sitting on the left side of the table and when he changes place with Jackal, now sitting next to Niou, Niou feels comfortable. Every thought about leaving early with some quickly made up excuse vanishes from his mind almost immediately. He doesn’t even wonder why. That was so very very sweet. So adorable and ( ... )

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ravenery December 8 2009, 19:02:55 UTC
Awwww, I'm so glad you liked it ;///; I'm really not good at writing happy fics... XD BUT I thought a birthday fic is not supposed to make you sad, so here it is. Furthermore, I figured a more 'innocent' Rikkai (without all the dark aspects and bad guys image and everything) would fit... therefore Niou, for example, is quite young ): Next time you'll get a more mature fic, promise ;;

Hehe, and I'm REALLY glad you liked Yukimura XD Even though I had NiouYagyuu in mind, I can't help including him and their awesome relationship ;D
<333 Including such phrases is usually not my cup of tea, but I'm happy you didn't find it too cheesy XD It is, though *hides*

YOU'RE WELCOME! <333 I would do it again, definitely, if my creativity is not a bitch XD
Love you, too <3333

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dark_kana December 9 2009, 10:49:01 UTC
Oh I did. I really did! ♥
A happy fic, an innocent Rikkai, a young Niou... *glomps* So cute! Really way to cute! ^^
You're gonna write me another fic one day? XD *glomps* Looking forward to it! XD

NiouYagyuu is an awesome pairing! But then again, so is NiouYukimura ... I'm glad you added some YukimuraNiou in it.

No, they weren't too cheesy ... They were perfect for the flow of this story !!! XD *drags you out of your hiding place*

*sends you some of her writing inspiration*

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ravenery December 11 2009, 18:39:30 UTC
I WILL! Promise, I will, once I feel like being overwhelmed by my inspiration XD It's really sad, I'd love to write everyday or at least regularly, but it simply doesn't work ):
I'm glad you think so ;///; Usually, I prefer the dark and angsty side of Rikkai but idk, your prompt made me think of that XD SUCH A COINCIDENCE, that Niou happened to have birthday as well in the fic ;D

askdhdkfhd true fact, NiouYukimura is... a really interesting relationship and it may be only me, but I think their relationship is really profound and subtle and gorgeous *o* So, yes, I agree with you wholeheartedly XD

XD I'm relieved you think so! But I think I have to go back to angsty fics, my hands rarely allow me to write something different XD
YES PLEASE *o*! *waits patiently*

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babytun December 8 2009, 19:36:30 UTC
Awww~ So damn cuuute *o* Wonderful fanfic <3 <3 <3

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ravenery December 8 2009, 21:23:45 UTC
Thank you so much ♥♥

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white_ashes07 December 23 2009, 16:26:01 UTC
Aww, that's really cute! I loved the interaction between the team members. It's like they don't seem to make much of an effort to please each other, yet they do get along in their own special way. Nice work! :)

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ravenery December 24 2009, 13:48:18 UTC
*_* Thank you so much for your nice comment! And I'm glad it came across the way I intended to. Because it rarely works. xD
Again, thank you for reading & commenting, makes me all happy <3

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