Comments | ravenery: [Fic] Tezuka/Fuji; Lost along the Way

ravenery

[Fic] Tezuka/Fuji; Lost along the Way

Apr 05, 2010 22:28

Title: Lost along the way
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters: Tezuka, Fuji
Summary: After going pro, Tezuka would have never believed that Fuji could be part of his life again.
A/N: Uhm, it indeed includes real tennis. Enjoy? ♥

( Fuji takes a step forward, touching his arm briefly. “Win tonight, will you?” )

!public, fandom, fic

Comments 27

marourin April 6 2010, 14:10:40 UTC

That was beautiful <3 I really enjoyed how you wrote it--I always love reading future-pro-fics and I like how it WASN'T a fairy tale and I found Tezuka very realistic in this (As a real tennis fan, I appreciate all the well...real tennis in it XD ) <3 thank yo for the fic.

ravenery April 7 2010, 18:33:30 UTC

Thank YOU so much for your lovely comment ♥ I'm glad the characters didn't come across as too weird or something xD;
As for the tennis, as I'm a tennis fan as well, I was SO tempted to include my favourite players... but it would be kind of weird, seeing Tezuka beat Federer or something... XD) Well, if Echizen is capable of beating Hewitt...

marourin April 8 2010, 10:07:23 UTC

<3 It's nice to see prince of tennis fans who are, you know, actual tennis fans XD

And dude, that would have been awesome, but yeah, haxxors weird. Tezuka losing was a good idea to keep it real feeling (specially since Japanese players don't tend to fare that well >>; )

ravenery April 8 2010, 11:19:10 UTC

Same here xD Before I started the series, I was wondering how a shounen manga is supposed to be about... well, tennis, that cannot be quite compared to fights and everything, but oh! Konomi invented fight scenes, and it all made sense then \o/

True! I mean, even the fact that both Fuji and Tezuka seem to be fairly successful here (Fuji winning the French Open, uh, okay...) is a bit weird xD

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jadeskye79 April 6 2010, 17:27:41 UTC

Beautiful! Both Tezuka and Fuji were portrayed true to character.

ravenery April 7 2010, 18:34:36 UTC

Thank you very much! It means a lot to me ♥

tacuma811 April 6 2010, 18:19:32 UTC

Wow, that was beautiful! I like how you describe Tezuka's emotions! ^_^ Who had ever guessed he had emotions?! XD I like how he is jealous at Fuji, who can play tennis. I guess I would be angry as well. But I love how it ends and how both of them find their way and how they can be together. Awesome!

ravenery April 7 2010, 18:35:50 UTC

askdsjk thank you so much ♥ At times I was really frustrated with the development, but I'm glad you seemed to have liked it. Again, thank you, it means so much to me <3

snow_meow April 7 2010, 17:05:05 UTC

I like this fic.
I found it to be really natural and real.
This waltz that Tezuka and Fuji take when it comes to their relationship is interesting.

ravenery April 7 2010, 18:36:53 UTC

Thank you very much! And I completely agree, their relationship is always interesting, which makes them a thrilling pairing ;D

das_vika April 7 2010, 19:33:26 UTC

Yay TezuFuji! =DDD I'm glad I laid my book aside to read this =)

Real (and believable) tennis! Roddick! Borg! Tezuka for once NOT beating everyone immediately! *0* And subtlety, I prefer subtlety SO MUCH over everything else =)

(There is a rather sudden (and very short) switch of POVs when Fuji is massaging Tezuka, but other than that, I didn't notice any errors ^o^)

ravenery April 8 2010, 11:26:38 UTC

Y-you did? ;////; Thank you so much! ♥
I am glad you like subtlety! XD So many people seem to prefer the things you practically have to shove into their faces ("it's more convenient!"), which is... -___- Thank you for your comment <3

(... ahhh, fuck xD I didn't notice that, but I am going to fix that! Thanks for pointing that out :D)