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[ravens_rising]

There are... definitely parts of this that are a little rough. Unfortunately, I am totally out of time. xD Oh well. At least I got it in~

Written for the fic contest over at senkaimon. This round was Byakuya/Renji.

Title: Sand
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,143
Warnings: blood, injuries, mention of character death, Byakuya being screwed up
Characters: Byakuya,

Comments

[saiyanzrepublik]

*sighs* Just gorgeous. Gorgeous like Renji's eyes. LOLZ Very well written, love it! :D

[ravens_rising]

Gorgeous? Eee, thanks so much! Glad I could do some justice to the imagery in my head. Thank you so much!

[wintaerland]

Oh, I really like this one. Angst and humor and slight fluff are all balanced perfectly against each other and not one of them is overwhelming. Very, very nice!

[ravens_rising]

Thank you very much! :)

[wintaerland]

Do you have an FF.net version of this?

[ravens_rising]

Yes, I do! I just uploaded it today. It can be found here.

[pony_rocks]

Wonderful! ♥

[ravens_rising]

Thank you!

[ravens_rising]

*dance* I made someone speechless! ♥ I'm so glad I did a half decent job getting the imagery out~ Blown away? :D

*hugs the characters too* Everyone in this fic really needs it akjdsl;fasdf;a I told you it was depressing. Much more than any of my others, because all the others have hope in them, but this one... doesn't. At all.

[blueabsinthe]

This is so gorgeous, and so fitting for both Byakuya and Renji.

It reads like both poetry and prose, which is not an easy thing to do ^^;

(Byakuya catches the last piece of sand.)

The last line is just perfect.

[ravens_rising]

Eeee, thank you very much! I'm so glad you thought it was fitting for them; I was worried I wasn't getting the pairing right. ^_^;;

I'm so, so glad that some of the poetry came through. That's what I was trying for. :)

THANK YOU. :)