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Feb 11, 2010 21:05



Title: Red
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 459
Warnings: injuries, mention of past character death
Characters: Byakuya, Renji, Ukitake, mentions of Hisana and Shunsui
Pairings: Byakuya/Renji, past Byakuya/Hisana, you can probably spot some Ukitake/Shunsui if you squint and stand on your head, or if you're weird like me xDD
Notes: The second birthday ficlet for ( Read more... )

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rii_no_ame February 12 2010, 02:13:14 UTC
....for a brief, horrible moment at the very beginning, I thought you had killed Renji, and now I am very happy with this fic because you did not. :D

What a lovely little piece. ♥

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ravens_rising February 12 2010, 02:19:29 UTC
Hahaha. In a way, that was my intention, because Byakuya kept seeing a dead!Renji in his head. But I could never kill off someone's favorite character in their birthday fic, so. xD

Hee, thanks! :D

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ravens_rising February 12 2010, 02:21:20 UTC
DDDDDDDDDDDD: NO CRYING! NO CRYING DURING A BIRTHDAY FIC! *PRODS MUSES* >:{ I'M SOWWY D: THEY LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER!

*HUGGLES YOU*

Of course it was Ukitake offering support xD It's so him. *ruffles his hair* There was supposed to be a comforting!Ukitake scene in the fic for tommorow, so I'm going to have to change that around a bit xDD

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iristigerlily February 16 2010, 04:14:09 UTC
I think it's a very good comparison of how Byakuya had reacted when Renji was first injured and now that they're together. Nice character introspection :D

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ravens_rising March 3 2010, 02:59:49 UTC
Thank you very much!

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ganja_chan May 3 2010, 19:37:21 UTC
It's been quite a while since you've posted that, but uni has killed my free time and I got to read it only now and-

OMG THAT WAS SO BITTERSWEET~~~~

I love that kind of fics if they are well written, and yours definitely is! SO MUCH IC for all the characters, and the perfect retrospection, and all... Loved it.

*gives a damn lot of cookies! plx make sure to give some to Bya, he deserves them*

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