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Mar 14, 2010 23:02


I really meant to have drabbles for more of the themes, but today ended up being much busier than I'd thought, and plus I had little muse. But hopefully you'll see some more in the next couple days, since I have ideas for some of the others. I know the deadline is tonight, but it's not like I'm going to be making a banner for myself anyway. :P

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ravens_rising March 15 2010, 21:05:39 UTC
Yeah, they both definitely need hugs at the beginning of the first one. Luckily they got some from each other by the end xD
Mmhmm, bitter was the tone I was going for. But he does do something about it someday! In my head, anyway xD.
Thank you!

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denshi_no_ultra March 15 2010, 11:28:01 UTC
Nice fics! The first one was really cute - that love confession was both awkward and sweet.

I really liked the second one - it was so emotional and realistic! I couldn't help but feel sorry for Ukitake there!

I enjoyed your fics, thanks for writing! :)

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ravens_rising March 15 2010, 21:03:38 UTC
Thanks!

I'm glad you thought the second one was realistic and emotional. :) Glad I pulled it off, hee! And don't worry, they get together in the end ;)

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ravens_rising March 16 2010, 02:34:49 UTC
He really needs a hug in that one D: Hopefully Shunsui will give him one someday y/y?

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liralen March 15 2010, 22:30:55 UTC
Awwww... the angst!!

It'll be interesting to see that backstory for the first... *grins* There has to be something for Jyuushiro to react that way, but it made sense even without.

And poor Jyuushiro in the second... Shunsui is very good a being charming in a very rakish way. *grins*

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ravens_rising March 16 2010, 02:46:33 UTC
*grins* You don't comment on that much of my stuff, but I find it ironic and sort of hilarious that you did this time.
I was actually- really, I'm completely serious- thinking about Twin Souls while I was writing the first one. *g* I was pondering that its idea was basically the opposite of your portrayal of them in Twin Souls (and related fics). Ukitake needing him to say the word "love". And the history-in-my-head for mine had something to do with Shunsui going a bit too far with a woman, or something like that, where in your fic that wouldn't really be an "issue" like it is here. (I think this is a sign that I've read your fic and really enjoyed thinking about your characterization in the love is an action conversation faaar too much; I'll shut up now!)

Yes, very much poor Ukitake in the second ^^;; Shunsui is definitely a handsome charmer, and he has no idea what he's doing to Ukitake in this instance. He'll figure it out someday, though!

Thanks for reading! ♥

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liralen March 16 2010, 04:26:17 UTC
Certainly. *laughs*

Very good point, all in all, and I hadn't really thought it all the way through, but it is pretty much the opposite of what I have set up in Twin Souls. *grins* Neat to know what you're thinking about!!

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nannete March 17 2010, 12:40:59 UTC
(for no. 2) :( Poor Ukitake. It's so very him :(

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ravens_rising March 17 2010, 20:53:26 UTC
*beams* Yay, I'm glad you think so!! I always get nervous about characterization whenever I go the darker!Ukitake route. :D

Don't worry, they get together someday~ *nods*

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nannete March 18 2010, 09:46:33 UTC
Nervous about characterisation? YOU?!

...heh, I would beat my head against the wall so hard if they didn't get together before one of them died :/ (that kind of fic... I won't go there!)

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ravens_rising March 23 2010, 00:59:17 UTC
O_O Yes. Quite. I get nervous about characterization quite often. ^^;;

Oh god yes. Even I'm not that mean. I do make them wait a long time, though. *giggles sheepishly* I have a couple longfic ideas that end up with them not getting together 'til around current canon time. >D A friend of mine says it's a miracle my muses work for me at all, after I torture them with 2,000 years of UST. >D

(UST: Unresolved Sexual Tension)

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