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[ravens_rising]

Series: A Hero

Chapter: Prologue- Concern
Rating: PG-13 / T
Word Count: 1,351
Warnings: some swearing, light angst
Characters: Ukitake, Renji, mention of Shunsui, Ichigo
Pairings: implied Renji -> Ichigo and Shunsui -> Ukitake
Notes: This is the short first chapter/prologue of that AU story I’ve talked about a couple times. I’ve tried to do my best

Comments

[slash4femme]

very interesting, I can't wait to read more of it. I am really enjoying the whole magic/war/end of world-feel AU aspect, very nice. I love the dynamics between Ukitake and Renji.

[ravens_rising]

Yay, thank you! I'm glad you like the atmosphere- it's one that will definitely continue. If I can pull it off, lol. ^^

And I'm really glad you like the dynamics! They're two characters that don't interact a lot- in canon or in fic- so I was a bit nervous about it.

[willidan]

I'm certainly intrigued.

[ravens_rising]

Thank you! I'm glad.

[writerx75]

OK, now you've got me interested. You seem to have a gift for setting a scene and giving a reader a sense of the characters you'll be working with without giving too much of the storyline away (since it seems you choose not to yet). I like the way you've introduced these two so far, and I look forward to seeing more of Renji being awesome!

[ravens_rising]

A gift? Wow, I'm honored! Thank you so much! Yes, that was exactly what I intended. I like writing plots where the reader finds out bits and pieces of the history and world as the fic goes on, eventually getting a complete picture by the end. Hopefully I can pull if off without people getting mad at me, lol. ^^;;

And you'll definitely have a lot of Renji being awesome! The whole idea of showing Renji being kickass is partly how this fic was inspired *g*.

[my_imaginating]

acck. now i've been sucked into your world, take responsibility! hahah. jk. it was good, very interesting. i can just imagine the havok shunsui is wreaking on poor jyuuishirou's lab. hahah. i'm excited for more.

[ravens_rising]

Ahah yay! Just as planned! *laughs* Really, I'm glad you like this world! :)

Oho, Shunsui takes great delight in messing with Ukitake and Ukitake's lab. xD

Thanks! :)