Bubble needing Dots

[ravi2007]

Naive as a bubble,
So tender and unpopped.
With air full of space,
To be occupied with dots.

Dots of experience.
Colors flying everywhere.
Until there's too many,
Then dots you will share.

Comments

Ravi and Emily Have Lots of Dots

[anonymous]

Hehe, there are a lot of bubbles at our school. Dot-less bubbles.

I like your poetry. I hadn't ready any before today but it's interesting. I usually don't like reading other people's poetry but yours I enjoy :)

~Emily