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Apr 25, 2005 15:38
joe wrote this from my essay lol
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my report on the impact of punk music in britian
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ravynvampire
April 25 2005, 23:55:56 UTC
you go girlfriend. fo sho....oh yeah...I am so gay that stop copying me.
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only_1_ledel
April 26 2005, 00:06:14 UTC
Just a little proofreading.
lines 9, 10, 11, 14, and more: use "their" not "there". check those
Line 16: "Uranus" is to be capitalized
I can't see any other errors (there might be some). Otherwise it seems fine to me.
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lines 9, 10, 11, 14, and more: use "their" not "there". check those
Line 16: "Uranus" is to be capitalized
I can't see any other errors (there might be some). Otherwise it seems fine to me.
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