009; Chaptered: Painful Bliss (Part 3 of 3)

Dec 23, 2014 23:05


Foreword:

I think I died. Bye.

Title: Painful Bliss (Part 3 of 3)
Pairing: Takaki Yuya/Inoo Kei
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Rating: PG-13 (Mentions of psychological issues.)
WARNING!Unbeta-ed. I haven't been able to edit this, I've taken the time to look over this quite a few times, however. And since I'm not a native english-speaker uhhh ;___; just be ( Read more... )

chaptered: painful bliss, fandom: hey say jump, p: takaki/inoo

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tasuku_kyota December 24 2014, 00:45:31 UTC
ありがとう‼︎

haaaa
Perfect story is perfect!!!! I cried and smiled all at once when I read this last chapter
This is.... beautiful... omg I even hard to describe of how awesome you could write takaino together
The hospital scene, inoo nursed takaki, got me, yeah...
It's hurtful yet too sweet, the way inoo doubted to touch takaki is aughhhh -- in a good way of course

Pleaseeee write more takaino in the future, it's soooo good
I love this, so much
And thanks for dedicating the last chap for me!!! I am so happy!! <3

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rawpickles December 24 2014, 09:29:00 UTC
you are too kind!
i love your enthusiasm and everlasting love towards takanoo ♡

thank you so much! i always feel like i don't write enough, or write too much, it's a sort of feeling that always gets me down, but you never fail to motivate me at the end of the day, so i'm always looking forward to seeing your comment! :)

i will, no problem!
i'm happy too, so thank you!

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tasuku_kyota December 24 2014, 10:53:19 UTC
I'm not that kind, honey XD
I'm just telling the truth and if I think there's something weird I'll say
But this story is really good, and awesome, and what makes it best is the way you wrote inoo's feeling for takaki beautifully
I can feel he reaaallly loves takaki he really is after all XD
I didn't expect for bb's past but that got me, too!! TakaChii is cute <3

Over all i love this story, gonna list on my favorites ;)
And i'm sorry if i am too noisy, bad habit I know XD
And yep, I love takaino so much, no need to ask
I'm waiting for your next stories, dear <3

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rawpickles December 25 2014, 11:15:17 UTC
thank you so much! i was reaaaaally really doubting my characterisation skills :'(

but i'm glad you liked it ♡

please don't hesitate if you want to request anything! i'll be more than happy to accommodate your takanoo needs! (if you're okay with it ♡)

p.s: bad habits are not always bad. pssshhhh

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yuukinanaka10 December 24 2014, 05:24:17 UTC

Will read it later!

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rawpickles December 24 2014, 09:29:48 UTC

no problem :')

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ficreader_02 December 25 2014, 22:08:17 UTC
Kyaah! TakaNoo is so loveeeee! And I love this too!

Thanks for this cute story! I'm adding you BTW ^_^

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rawpickles December 26 2014, 12:57:54 UTC
takaki is loveeee indeeeeed.
they're so cute together! :')
oh my! thank you so much for the lovely words m'dear ♡
i'm so happy you enjoyed this!! despite how crappy it's written :(

and thank you so much for the add!
adding you back right away :)

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lu_mi_na December 26 2014, 11:34:55 UTC
OMG! This is way too awesome it can't be true~ *v*
I just finished reading the 3 chapters and I really enjoyed every one of them!

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rawpickles December 26 2014, 13:03:00 UTC
AAAA you literally just made me burst with happiness!
well, maybe not literally but i felt like it was :')
this fic being told 'awesome' is like, the highest compliment there is, so thank you thank you thank you! sooooo much!

i'm so happy ;_________;
/brb crying with happiness in the corner

thank you again for taking the time to comment ♡ /sniffles

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lu_mi_na December 27 2014, 11:41:01 UTC
I'm glad you are happy! Because you also made me happy by your fic! XD
No problem & thanks to you too! ^^

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jupearl December 26 2014, 22:19:47 UTC
After reading all 3 parts I have to say this is one of the best fics I've read in a long time <333

The relationship created between the characters and the atmosphere shift along the journey were all just... lalssfaskdshflakdasf i'm in love ^o^
The brutality inflicted on Takaki and Daiki during his death scene made me cringe in agony, but I wouldn't have it any way! It was painfully wonderful.

Also the small Inoobu moments were all so cute and just I can't... this fic is just too amazing! <3

Definitely adding this to my favourites! Thank you so much for this emotional ride of wonders!!!! ^3^ <3

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rawpickles December 27 2014, 13:08:27 UTC
you just made my day night! ;_____;

thank you so much for taking the time to read & comment, you've inspired me with your words and i'm very delighted in seeing you enjoy this fanfic! i wish i could write like you though :')

as far as adding this to your favourites? :'D omg~
no, thank you sooooooooo much for your kind words! it makes me want to never stop writing ♡

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jupearl December 27 2014, 20:08:52 UTC
please i would die just to be able to write with such description and immersion as you ;A; it's really something i can't seem to be able to perfect yet.

i'm glad i made your night with my words and i'm glad you made my day with this fic! <3

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