Comments | rawtooth: The Games We Play

rawtooth

The Games We Play

Dec 29, 2006 22:14

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annapeace December 30 2006, 08:04:10 UTC

Okay, it could be the late hour or my stupidness, but I had to read it twice to get it. But once I did, amazing. I love the way the girls are described and the way they are flawless together and especially the hint of what's to come.

rawtooth December 30 2006, 09:43:15 UTC

I have lately evolved into a writing style, that when I first read it under Matthew Stover's touch, I also had trouble reading it. However, I feel it helps add a rather unique touch, letting me try and do things I would have badly butchered before.

Mai and Ty Lee always struck me as having a special bond. And the hint of what is to come is what I'm also looking forward to.

illidanstr December 30 2006, 13:56:49 UTC

Your writing's intriguing, though it's hard for me to follow the story due to its background. Nevertheless, I'm liking the style.

rawtooth December 31 2006, 22:28:34 UTC

Ah, but if you used your voodoo black magic, you could understand. You only have... oh, twenty hours or so to catch up and have seen everything. Chop, chop!

birdsarecalling January 1 2007, 00:59:19 UTC

Oh, dude! You finally started to get this posted! :D

I've been out of town for a couple days and now I have to dash out for New Years celebrating, but I will be back with genuine non-crappy feedback ASAP!

rawtooth January 1 2007, 02:15:35 UTC

Go and party like it's 1999 2007!

And I await your return!