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[rawwounds]

The rain jeweled all the leaves of the tree with crystal droplets, bringing the world a rich deep gloss of colour. The tree was jade and henna, the ground beneath it dark, bitter chocolate. The hulking form of the school, half seen through the leaves, was crimson brick and inky blacktop. Ophelia breathed in deeply, trying to memorize the smell, the

Comments

Good writing

[shrouddnfog]

Very well written.

[lillysdoll]

i like it. *nods*

[anonymous]

OUch. I just read this fully Gloria. I am sorry. It sounds alot like you. I mean from the description and the thoughts. i am wondering who Jen is, and why yoyur heart is so heavy with the thoughts of her. I am sorry if I am either reading too much into this or reading into it wrong altoether. I do enjoy the writting though. You have a great deal of talent, and you have a realy good grasp of description. YOu have a great gift hun, and it can help to carry you far in life. Be well Gloria, and I hope things go better for you. Yes there is darkness in life. Trust me I know. More than you realize. But there are also other things taht will brighten that darkness. And it may surprise you were you can find that brilliance. Take good care of yourself and try to keep smiling. Even if others cannot see you in the light that you wish for them to see you in. Cio beautiful.

William