Re: I like your hatraygoldentreeMay 15 2004, 23:24:55 UTC
its an eddie bauer hate, i do listen to tunes and i think up how it might sound like listening to different beats, then i just sing it in my heart and just write what i feel.
Re: I like your hatraygoldentreeMay 15 2004, 23:44:49 UTC
sleep what is that?
when you write you shouldn't force it, it should come freely, should be natural and from the soul, words are better than paint, because you can shape and form them whatever way you wish and tweak them better, and make them more beautiful than any painting.
Crappy yeah right...sexier_than_youMay 16 2004, 01:18:44 UTC
Gosh that was freaking awesome! +Voice +Flow of words +Descriptive +Flavorful +Vivid
How can THAT poem be crappy? You know what poem would be crappy here let me think of one...Okay.
"A heart shattered girl, after a long harsh break up, sobbing shivering hiding, blood covered clothes with holes, signs of abuse all over the room, grey stormy sky peering in, how did this all happen...rapid shatters, violent blows, slicing knives, torn up clothes, silent screams, no body knows, fresh blood stains, shrieks of hurt, throbbing hearts, piercing pains, scowled expressions, lashing chains."(c)mercedes04
I'm not good at quick poems, but hey NOW I have proven that yours is like an illuminating star compared to mine!
Re: Crappy yeah right...raygoldentreeMay 16 2004, 08:07:18 UTC
Comparing poetry, is like asking the PLO to gather the palestines and ask them polietly to stop sucide attacking and them have them polietly nod their heads realize what they are doing and go fishing, while telling the israelis to move back a bit and share their country. Immpossible. to many perspectives, rationals, and personal enjoyments.
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when you write you shouldn't force it, it should come freely, should be natural and from the soul, words are better than paint, because you can shape and form them whatever way you wish and tweak them better, and make them more beautiful than any painting.
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+Voice
+Flow of words
+Descriptive
+Flavorful
+Vivid
How can THAT poem be crappy? You know what poem would be crappy here let me think of one...Okay.
"A heart shattered girl, after a long harsh break up, sobbing shivering hiding, blood covered clothes with holes, signs of abuse all over the room, grey stormy sky peering in, how did this all happen...rapid shatters, violent blows, slicing knives, torn up clothes, silent screams, no body knows, fresh blood stains, shrieks of hurt, throbbing hearts, piercing pains, scowled expressions, lashing chains."(c)mercedes04
I'm not good at quick poems, but hey NOW I have proven that yours is like an illuminating star compared to mine!
Take care.
xoxo <3<3
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But, I liked yers.
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