Poem: Soldier

[raygoldentree]

Comments

[dangercat]

very beautiful!!

Huggles,

Danger Cat

[belishar]

Hi,that's a really nice poem. It reminds me of a song by The Levellers called Battle of the Beanfield, it's about a mother who sits at home and her husband and both her son's have died at war, the song is about her last surviving son dying. I realise the subject isn't exactly the same but your poem has the same drive behind it to me. I like it.

[raygoldentree]

Grazi, hmm i have not heard of that song i will go download it now.

[that_emo_dork]

u r hot. whats yer sn

[raygoldentree]

lol, I am average, my sn, screeen name? for what may i ask my dear :) msn aol or yahoo? or is there another?!@!?

[anonymous]

join u_sexy_thing

[raygoldentree]

But i ain't sexy :P

[zeraphim]

Yes you are! *Grins n' winks*

[devilish666]

very nice. so much talent. lol you got it going for you, your sexy and a poet! mmmmmhmmmm! lol

[raygoldentree]

meh, i write what i can in hopes others can enjoy.