Comments | rayhne: Blind Trust 2/3

rayhne

Blind Trust 2/3

Sep 08, 2010 20:13

Fandom: Supernatural
Characters/Pairings: Crowley/Bobby
Rating: R for Graphic Sex, Rape, Language, Torture
Summary: Bobby finds an injured Crowley on his doorstep.

( He swore and ran to the house, throwing open the door in time to see Dean leveling a rifle at the demon's ... his demon, damn it! ... back. )

fandom: supernatural, character: bobby, pairing: crowley/bobby, character: crowley, rating: r

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rayhne September 9 2010, 02:08:56 UTC

Come on, you just know Crowley would find Lovecraft amusing.

Dean is being an ass and with what he thinks is a good reason.

Thanks for reading. Part three (the final part) will be out this weekend.

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rayhne September 9 2010, 02:21:08 UTC

You're the second person who has told me that about Lisa. Since I don't really know the character and I suspect she isn't really developed in the show, I'm playing fast and loose with her character.

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ceilingninja September 9 2010, 20:46:58 UTC

EEEEEEE!

That is the sound I made when I saw this had been updated! Another fabulous chapter.

rayhne September 10 2010, 00:14:20 UTC

Thank you! One more chapter in this story and then back to my Leverage story for a bit. There will be a sequel called Blind Faith but I haven't decided what direction to go in as yet.

sarahlizzie September 9 2010, 22:22:54 UTC

If I were to tell you everything I adored about this story, I'd be commenting forever. Either that or I could just quote the entire chapter, but that seems a little redundant. XD
My absolutely favoritest part was Bobby having that little smile at Crowley when he was curled up in bed. (And sneaky!Cas is always fun XD)
Also, you've made me like Lisa too...which is kinda awesome really, seeing as booing and hissing at her might make season 6 a little awkward to watch.
I don't know if you're trying to kill me with cuteness, or if you're trying to make me write long, rambling comments (which you've succeeded in, btw)...either way, keep up the awesome work, and the next chapter honestly can't come quickly enough.
~love~ !

rayhne September 10 2010, 00:34:43 UTC

Thank you! This is fun to write!

Bobby seems to smile more around Crowley, probably because he knows the demon can see that he is. Makes you wonder if he will continue to do so if Crowley ever gets his sight back.

I like strong female characters and since I don't know Lisa's personality well (or even if she really has one), I'm developing her along those lines.

The next (and last) part of this story will be posted this weekend. I need to do some tweaking of it first. Then it's back to my Leverage story for a bit before writing the sequel.

rayhne September 10 2010, 00:36:06 UTC

That should be can't see that he is ...