'Becoming X' - Part two

Feb 10, 2010 19:56

Frank/Gerard
Rating: R
Warning for character death.

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suchaprettydoll February 10 2010, 21:56:21 UTC
I did this when I saw you posted *dances like a spaz*
I shall read it now.
HURRAH!

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rayla_ February 11 2010, 18:52:17 UTC
:) Hope you like!

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mistersandbox February 11 2010, 02:53:31 UTC
OMG SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS JUST SO, SO MUCH
I'M MAKING A TRILLION TYPOS RIGHT NOW AT THIS MOMENT, SO LET ME TRY AND SQUEEZE A FEW SENTENCES OF COHERENCY HERE:

-I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE CONVERSATION. YOUR CHARACTERS HAVE THEIR OWN VERY SPECIFIC PERSONALITIES AND LANGUAGE AND ITS JUST BRILLIANT.

-BRIAN!!!!!!!!!!! ;________;

-THE FEEL OF THIS STORY. ITS GOT THIS DIRTY, GRIMY, I'M-AN-EVIL-VILLAIN-SO-DON'T-TOUCH-ME VIBE GOING ON. I LOVE IT AND I LOVE IT LONG TIME.

♥ ♥
MUCH LOVE FOR THIS~

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rayla_ February 11 2010, 18:49:47 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting! Glad you enjoyed it. I'm having loads of fun writing it.

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peekabooby February 11 2010, 05:39:22 UTC
OH GOD MY HEART. This has an amazing atmosphere and all these little details that send my imagination sprawling, making want to know more.

I'm not gonna lie, I saw NC-17 and went 'YAY PORN!" but since reading I'm like "YAY PLOT! NEED MOAR." Very satisfying.

I am basically in love with this story; I'd wait another six months for an update but I'd probably cry. SOMEONE GET ME AN IV SO I CAN MAINLINE THIS SHIT, YO.

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rayla_ February 11 2010, 18:51:22 UTC
I really appreciate the nice comments, thanks so much for taking the time to leave them! I have a pretty good idea where I'm going with the rest of the last part so hopefully it won't be more than a few months wait.

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lemon_murder February 12 2010, 01:47:10 UTC
I love this story!
Poor Gerard! Fair enough, he's a robot and therefore has no feelings. But he is so helpless, and Frank is so heartless! Maybe i'm wrong, but i get the impression that Gerard likes Frank? What's he supposed to do with himself now!? Aww.
But i suppose that is what Frank had to do. I wonder who sent him the message about not letting Gerard follow him? [If that is what it meant]
Bless Sketcher, i liked him.
More soon!!

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rayla_ February 12 2010, 18:30:52 UTC
Thank you!

I'd have to say that yes, he likes Frank. I don't think it's entirely true that he has 'no feelings'. He might experience something like human emotions, from programmed information given to him when he was made. Or maybe Schechter gave him a 'must mack the hot hacker' patch for fun. Who knows.

BTW, it was Price who sent Frank the message ;) Maybe I need to make that part clearer?

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philosiraptors February 19 2010, 03:10:45 UTC
omg moar ;_____;

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rayla_ February 19 2010, 07:34:50 UTC
I am writing the last part as we speak! :D

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