The Fortuitous Outcome of a Well Strategized Offense

Apr 17, 2012 16:13

Title:     The Fortuitous Outcome of a Well Planned Offense
Format: Multi-chapter
Chapter: #6, 1,240 words
Author:  raynesupreme
A/N:      Sorry, this was long in posting. Got stalled. Then got inspired by last night's episode of Castle.

It was a slight shift in strategy, he had to admit. Well, maybe not a shift exactly. Maybe more like a new focus or ( Read more... )

jayne, farm, nightie, river, seduction

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ereshai April 18 2012, 19:51:57 UTC
Ahahahaha! Sneaky River ;)
I was very happy to see a new chapter posted.

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raynesupreme April 20 2012, 04:58:33 UTC
Oh, I love sneaky River too. I also love that Jayne is so flustered. Since I have NO idea where this is going, let me know if you have ideas and/or suggestions. That goes for anyone reading this story!

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revdorothyl April 25 2012, 20:34:30 UTC
Don't know how I missed this last week, but I'm glad to find it now. Love river out-smarting Jayne at every turn, while trying to let him know in not-too-subtle way that she wants exactly what he wants and is scheming to get. The line from the first paragraph about needing to be concerned about still having hands attached to his arms after getting his hands on the girl was particularly good!

And, while I'm at it, I hope you're having a very happy birthday today!

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raynesupreme April 26 2012, 05:24:28 UTC
Thanks! This one is going slower than most, probably because I didn't plot it out. Oh well. It's still fun! I'm glad you are enjoying it!

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