FIC: Outside Athens Part 12 (H/C)

[razor840]

Title: Outside Athens Part 12
Author: Razor840
Pairing: H/C, W/C (W/C friendship, H/W friendship)
Summary: "Thank you for showing me who I really am. I can't change who I am, I might not have been as aware of it as I should have been. Maybe I was. Maybe you were the only person who really saw how ugly and contemptable I could be. I've decided to

Comments

[hughville]

I love the background you gave Cameron. It explains alot about her.

I love that Chase is slowly unraveling. The show seems to have dropped it but it's nice that you have him really suffering. I doubt anyone would bounce back as quickly as he seems to on the show.

I can't wait for House and Cameron to meet up.

[sarrie5]

I want to say that reading your story gives me immense pleasure. Thank you for writing.

The way you capture the characters is amazing. You portray them, reflecting all shades of their typical emotions and reactions, and that’s what makes your fic so interesting, dramatic and substantial. House, Cameron, Wilson, Foreman - well, all of them have been written perfectly.

I had hoped that you’d address Chase’s issues in more detail, because the topic is complex and controversial, so needless to say how glad I was to read this powerful and expressive chapter. Very intense and great-written. I especially liked mentions of Cameron’s photos and things almost all over the place and the phrase about not really knowing her.

I'm looking forward to reading what will happen when Cameron comes.

[ladyofshalott06]

Powerful chapter. Your writing is spellbinding.

I especially enjoyed Chase's musings on Cameron and on his own life and past at the beginning of the chapter. Nice job.