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[razorleaf]

1-2 spaces should always be put after a period and one after a comma. Thats you're biggest grammar mistake, and although its not too important, it makes it cleaner. I recommend using a word processor, as it will tell you when something is off on sentence structure.*headdesk

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[bay115]

I actually ROFL when this was posted:

'I recommed learning a bit more about writing interestingly before you continue.'

I guess he/she meant to have the writing more interesting, but that sentence is really awkward to me. Then again, I just woke up when I read Skydra's post. XD

[razorleaf]

Too much FLOL over at Serebii. It's making my brain hurt.