Chapter 2: IF ONLY

[razzthekid]

Title: If Only
Pairing: Zaylor. Obviously.
Rating: Hmmm...I'd say PG-13, or maybe a VERY mild R due to the fact that it's from the point of view of a hormone-driven teenage boy. 'Nuff said.
Summary: I wanna hold you and love you, in my arms and then/ I wanna need you 'cause I need to be with you til the end/ Then I hear myself reply, you've got to

Comments

[razzthekid]

Yay, thank you so much! Writing angsty teenage Taylor is so much fun, but surprisingly harder than I thought it would be!Hopefully it will get easier as I get used to it. I'm still such a noob lol.

[kidsincfan101]

This is amazing:)
I was itching for agnst 4 some reason, but this is brilliant! 3 ;)

[razzthekid]

Thank you!
And I know right? I'm always itching for Zaylor angst.

[ahopper84]

oh wow! this was awesome! i feel so bad for taylor... i think you captured his voice really well. can't wait to read more! =D

[razzthekid]

Aw thank you so much! More shall be coming soon, as soon as this writer's block goes away...

[eleflowerpot]

This was fantastic! You really captured the feelings of a teenager who knows it's wrong.

[onlybonesremain]

It had never felt so real as it did right then, so possible, like if only I could close the distance between us, put my lips on his, then everything would finally be okay. He would kiss me back and tell me that I wasn’t alone.

I really loved the whole thing, but these sentences in particular made me feel so much. I think you did an amazing job, and I can't wait for more!

[razzthekid]

Thank you thank you!!! More is on the way very soon I hope. Currently working on the story for Runaway Run and I'm pretty excited about it, so hopefully it comes out the way I want it to haha.