Comments | rc_6237: Mission 9: Abby's New Partner

rc_6237

Mission 9: Abby's New Partner

Jun 12, 2011 12:39

Rating: PG-13/T

Fandom: NCIS

( In which a metahuman is discovered in the NCIS 'Verse, and too much mint tea is drunk. )

missions, sue: godmod!stu, sue: kid!stu, fandom: ncis

Comments 3

indemaat June 13 2011, 08:38:00 UTC

Nice mission. I like that it is as 'calm' as my own missions often are.

A while ago someone asked me if I could mission this fic. I hadn't looked at it yet, but I can now inform this person that the stu is taken care of.

vgdivision June 14 2011, 21:27:34 UTC

Very nice. Oy, that Stu! You handled the mission expertly and I loved the interaction between your agents, especially when Lee is tripping on the mint tea. Well-written flirtatious agent fluff is always fun to read.

Speaking of the mint tea, however, it feels like there's a bit of a logical error there. Surely Lee would have already known about the effects of mint on felines. And yet, she not only brings the tea along in the first place but seems surprised when Ian points it out to her after she's recovered. Did she bring the tea purposefully to get high during the mission?

rc_6237 June 16 2011, 20:32:14 UTC

The short answer is yes, given that she knew how bad the mission was. The long answer is a bit more complicated, but boils down to the same answer.