Symmetry
Edited!version of FH's Xmas present, brought to you by teh snowiness of Michigan weather. AF fanfic, Insangeline with a side order of Arty. Notes at bottom.
Symmetry.
He doesn’t like her blue dress. He never did, he’d much rather have it burned, replaced with something else, like periwinkle or lavender, something soft and warm and motherly. He ( Read more... )
Symmetry.
He doesn’t like her blue dress. He never did, he’d much rather have it burned, replaced with something else, like periwinkle or lavender, something soft and warm and motherly. He ( Read more... )
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I definitely get it more now than when I first read it. (This is most likely because I was dead tired on the first readthrough. =P)
Record it! I would listen to it, at least. *fangirlfangirl*
"Her face is to the window, the symmetry perfect: ghostly reflection and ghostly perception, looking inwards from a lush green world and looking outwards from a verdantly troubled conscience."
Absolutely love this image.
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...I'll record this weekend sometime, maybeish. It'll have to be after I get high on Dew at the latenighter sci oly practice and before I get drunk at the anti-Valentine's Day party.
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So this is Artemis Fowl? Eoin Colfer?
Anyway, I thought it was a bit more subtle but a bit less intricate than my sample of your writing. Cheers!
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Just in case you are interested the 274th digit of PI is 3.
Best wishes,
TPWFL
(ask the white lily if you are curious)
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But that messes with my random symmetry. *curses universe for having a constant that doesn't go along with her fic*
Well, it's fanfic. Maybe in Arty's universe the 274th digit of pi is 9.
I'll fix it whenever I come back to this. Thanks for pointing it out anyhows. [/rambling]
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